RPG - Secret Resistance on Manaan (Page 18 of 20)

"Well," Que said, "I'll just go out and see if your miffed friend is doing ok.  You guys met all sorts of people while I was gone.  You'll have to fill me in later.  That is, if you don't replace me before then."  Que went to find Vrook before anything else happened.  That's when he sensed him.  "Oh poodoo." Que spat, "Rekk's friend has gotten in over his head.  Why is it that humans always pick just the worst times to have falling outs?"  Que sent a mental warning to the others, hoping that they would come quickly to his aid. If they didn't, he'd have to take all the blame when their friend was killed.  He just hoped it wouldn't come to that, as he slowly prepared his saber of battle. Again.

"Sith Spit! He's quick to run off isn't he?" Rekk cursed. "C'mon Utath, let's go and make sure he doesn't get himself killed."

Kain was closer, he saw what he was looking for the dug(Ques a dug right?) fighting a Gen'Dai, that was bad. It looked like Vrook was already seriously wounded. He jumped, drawing his lightsaber. He landed next to the Gen'Dai and slashed at it quickly. It swung at him, and he pushed it back. The others were here. Kain stretched out his hand, and released a large burst of lighning at the droid.

(RUN Gen'Dai RUN)

((GRAAAAA! I had a huge long post but my 13 year old little sister deleted it to do "myspace" (wich I hate btw) oh well I'll just have to type it all over again.   also I going to ignore Kain if thats alright I think I have a better ending))

Aphotic's armor took most of the hits without harm "Cotorsis. You jedi never learn." at that Aphotic pushed a button on this wrist gauntlet. Two nexus http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Nexu came running at the other jedi. The nexus were armored (so one hit won't stop them) and could be controlled by the collar that was around their necks. "That should give us some time alone jedi." said Aphotic as he cached Vrook by his feet as he tried to jump over Aphotic. Aphotic then swung him to the ground and pulled out a vibroblade "Time to die jedi." taunted Aphotic. "My names Vrook!" with that Vrook grabbed Aphotic's wrist before the blabe came all the way down and pushed Aphotic away with his other had. Que was able to get there in time to see Vrook push Aphotic. (he left before the rest so the nexus didn't catch him.) "Vrook!" called out Que. Aphotic looked over at Que and chuckled. "Hmra ha ha! so you've come to die as well?" Que said nothing he jumped at Ahpotic, landing on his chest "Get away you parasite!" Said Ahpotic but before he could hit Que off Que had already poured acid onto Aphotics armor leaving a hole. Que tried to jump away but Aphotic grabbed him around the neck and was about to finish off Que when Vrook shot a laser bolt into the hole in Aphotic's armor. "Graaa!" Aphotic then turned still holding Que but not quite squeezing him to death. he then through the vibroblade at Vrook he  was too busy lining up the next shot to move in time... The blade sunk deep into his chest "Nnn!"
Vrook slid to the ground. "No! Blast you Gena'd..." At that Ahotic squeezed hard on Que's neck. "Die. jedi." the taunt was simple but it hurt. Que was seeing spots his life...all the things he had done... the bets won and lost... his family...enslaved. right when he thought that was was dead the grip on his neck was released. Vrook had use the last of his power...and his life to blast Aphotic with a bust of force lightning in the hole is his armor. the lightning rode up Aphotics spine and his his brain sending him sprawling back. "NRnnaa*zit zZZiT* Rhaaa!" Aphotic called his ship to him and got on his nexus fallowed. Que got up and ran to Vrook. Vrook had just enugh strength to give a last word (Karson you can write what he say's) and die.

(Wait...then why did they even need to be armored???????????????????????)

you could have just carried on with your post....
but anyways, ill just delete it, because the entire thing is about killing them (And we wouldent be slowed by them anyways)

You didnt even need to add the Nexu, for that matter...

Rekk led the charge, "Vrook is this way, I can sense him."

Utath and Rekk stopped short as they saw Vrook lying wounded, clearly dying. "Can you do anything?" Utath asked Rekk.

Utath knelt down behind Vrook and pillowed his head against her knees, "Vrook can you hear me?"

Que looked on and also asked Vrook if he understood.

Kain stood back, he wasnt able to help, the jedi was to far gone.

Rekk looked back for a moment "Help us!"

Kain looked over, suprisingly calm given the circumstances. "He is to close to death."

"You can still help." Kain walked over, and crouched next to his body. Vrook's breathing was very rapid.
The vibroblade was still in his chest. Utath moved her had to pull it out. Kain grabbed her wrist "No, that will make it worse." Vrook stared at the sky blankly, he stopped breathing, and a moment later, his hand, which had been balled into a fist, relaxed.

((I don't care if he joins ))

Rekk shook his head, standing up. "He's gone," He sighed, feeling that empty spot in the Force that signaled a death. "Sorry, but there wasn't anything I could do."

He looked over at Zar, getting inbetween him and Utath. "No, let him say who he is first Utath," He said, waiting for an answer.

"Well I assume you want revenge. But we need to find him first. Any suggestions?" Kain looked at everyone, waiting for a answer.

Kain looked at the ofiicer "I'm Kain, not that this is the time to be introducing my self, and not that I realy care what your name is." He looked over to Rekk. "Now, once again, do you have any idea where he is?"