Topic: The Daleks

Mark Fadinom loaded his battle rifle. He loaded a catridge into the empty magazine space and loaded. CHICK! CHICK!

He waited.

" Report! What is the status of the humans? "

" All Exterminated! Dalek's are supreme! "

Urggh. The Daleks..... He absolutely hated them, and he had been on an assault to kill them but his team had failed...... He looked at loathing at them. They were so evil and hatreded...

Mark unclipped a grenade from his belt and fitted it into his pocket.

He heard the Dalek Commanders again.

" Are the human's finished with, Dalek Jav? "

" YeS! ThEy aRe AlL ExTeRmInAtEd! " Dalek Jav replied.

Mark waited until they rolled out.

He looked around....

His eyes swelled with tears.......

His team were scattered across the floor.

All......of ................them..................................................................

All 17 of them.......

He picked up an energy rifle from the floor and checked the ammo

It read:

AMMO: 0%
Status of gun mode: N/A

Mark toosed it away. That was the mistake he made. A Dalek's cry broke out,

" Human!!! On board! Exterminate! Exterminate! Exterminate!!!!!!!! "

Then four Dalek's rolled out. Mark got his grenade and threw it, two dalek's cried out " BLAAAAAAAH!!!! "

Then they exploded.

Mark fired his rifle at the other two. The bullets's pinged and cracked off the Dalek Armour harmlessly.

Then he got angry with them, after all they'd done to him and screamed and fired at the eye stalks. The dalek's also screamed and exploded.

They a Dalek Leader came out.

This one was stronger.

The Leaders always had bronze plates of metal stuck to them at the side..........

Always............................

( I shall post a sequel soon, folks! big_smile )

TO BE CONTINUED!!!!
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You're foolish words can never hurt me

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Re: The Daleks

yay. allthough i didn't like how you kiled all the people

"My luck ranges from barely tolerable to cataclysmic"

3 Reply by Valthonin (edited by Valthonin Tuesday, July 8, 2008 6:38 am)

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Masterchief wrote:

Mark Fadinom loaded his battle rifle. He loaded a catridge into the empty magazine space and loaded.

Indeed....

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Re: The Daleks

please post a sequel where all humans are alive

"My luck ranges from barely tolerable to cataclysmic"

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revan07 wrote:

please post a sequel where all humans are alive

meh...

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No. It's my creative, but I won't make them stay alive all the time....... smile tongue

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Re: The Daleks

Chief

I am new hear and all, is this a series you are trying to create?

I like the desperate feel you paint for this guy as he tries to figure out how to at least take a few of these beasts down with him.

Makes me think of STARSHIP TROOPERS when the CPL palms an explosive and decides he is just trying to kill more bugs.

"We do bad things to worse people"

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Valthonin wrote:
Masterchief wrote:

Mark Fadinom loaded his battle rifle. He loaded a catridge into the empty magazine space and loaded.

Indeed....

you can never go wrong with loading a gun 3 times.

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Lol.
I like your story MC.

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Heh heh heh, thanks Merciless.

Yeah, you can't go there 3 times, Fett_II. wink tongue

And Viking1, I am glad you understand how the Creative is trying to set. Cheers!

For a 12 year old, I'm pretty crap at making them! tongue

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Masterchief wrote:

For a 12 year old, I'm pretty crap at making them! tongue

Not to worry though. You are at school, so you can learn how to improve them big_smile

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Masterchief wrote:

For a 12 year old, I'm pretty crap at making them! tongue

Your not that bad. I may be the best at writing in my class at scholl but i do know some really bad writers who aren't even serious about it. And the stuff they do is so bad its funny, and they don't care

"My luck ranges from barely tolerable to cataclysmic"

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To be perfectly honest, I'm much, much, MUCH BETTER at Art.

For all of you who like Humour, I made this funny cartoon last year called Tim The Thing

He is a Geography Teacher and he has these Orphan children who he teaches. ( He is a spiky monster btw wink )

His weapons are simple: An eye Laser ( red laser beam ) and if his children get the Grammar wrong, or if they annoy him badly while he is calm, he kills them with hatred!

Here is his fact file:

Geography Teacher
Spiky Monster
WOC: Eye Laser ( red laser beam )
Children: Usually about at least 3 or 4 in each comic, but he has about 7.
Hates: Bad Grammar
Likes: Children
Also Likes: eating/killing children
Hates: Bad Grammar. ( tongue )

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Masterchief wrote:

To be perfectly honest, I'm much, much, MUCH BETTER at Art.

I'm pretty good at art to and i'm also good at stories like yours.

So anyway whens the next part

"My luck ranges from barely tolerable to cataclysmic"