Poetry (Page 4 of 6)

Thank you very much it means a lot to me, and Im sorry I called you out like that. I shouldnt have ASSUMED that you were shy. Like you said, every poem brings out a different emotion in different poeple, and it varies as well. I REALLY hope to see more of your poems soon, because I love all of ya'lls writing!!

TW

That is very much so. Although I cant shake the feeling that my skin will forever be a line of skrimage. If I can only hope that soon one day, the color of my skin would not matter in any situation.

TW

I have one that Black Sabbath wrote, and I took a sentence out and am still trying to work on it.

here is my first starting point

* clears throat *

??? ( Unknown poem )

Heavy Boots of lead,

Tearing through your victim's head!

( Guitar, Iron Man , SOLO )

Scary books of lies,

Soaring across the ancient skies.........

( Guitar, Iron Man SOLO )

...... Sorry if it's too short , but I just thought of some ryhming words  for it.................

oh...................

Babes.. thats dark and deep and full of sadness...  things that make great poetry and other creative things. I am impressed as this differs from the others.

Yeah I think you know who I was talking about there. I'm surprised I still didn't make anything happen to her in an artwork or another... If I do I'll show you.

Thanks for your compliments. I love what you write as well.

I hope i am not flooding every one with my stuff... please let me know if I am, but here is another one i found as I cleaned my room.

Deep Breath
Soon this all will be over
Deep breath
Calm down
Soon this all will be over
Embrace the quiet
Deep breath
Soon this all will be over
Peace in sleep in dreams
Beauty amongst quiet lands
Deep breath
Soon this all will be over
Dark night decending
Starlight cascading down
Worry no longer
Deep breath
Soon this all will be over
Pain be past
Loving arms open
Warmth from this chill
Deep breath
Soon this all will be over.

Hi y'all!

I posted this in Ralin's Creations, but since it's a poem I thought I'd sare it here also.  This one has had an edit or two.  Feel free to let me know which you like better

Hope you like   

Into the Light – A Mandalorian’s Fate

Into the light,
Under my proud Father’s eyes,
From my loving Mother’s womb,
I pass into the light of life

Into the light,
Of childhood’s first trials,
Out of my Mother’s care and into my Father’s protection,
Past are my toys and carefree existence,
New is my blaster and fresh is my first kill,
Down the path of manhood I begin

Into the light,
Of my armor’s heavy embrace,
My brothers cheer and my sergeants salute,
Clad in armor forged of Mandalorian iron,
The newest Mandalorian am I

Into the light,
Of the strange thing that is love,
My heart burns, yet it pains me not,
Never have I felt what I feel for her,
My soul flies high, yet I stand beside her
Into the warmth of love I enter

Into the light,
Of my first battle’s furry,
Many souls does my Basilisk claim as I descend into the glory that is war,
My Father’s lessons are clear and my aim is true,
Into the light of victory I march

Into the light,
Of failure’s stark chill,
Our wounded scream and my fallen brothers are mourned,
The battle is lost, and my soul is cold,
My first defeat is bitter indeed

Into the light, Of war’s familiar pitch,
My battles are many, as are my scars, but I am still alive,
The blood of thousands is on my hands, and worlds fear my approach,
A Mandalorian Crusader am I

Into the light,
Of my body’s final breaths,
My strength is gone, and my eyes grow dim,
The grip of my son is firm, his gloved hand in mine,
A tear in his eye, he whispers to me,

Pass now, into the light my Father,
Your battles are many, and your Honor is great,
March now to the place far away,
And wait for me at Glory’s gate

wow, truly poetic ner vod. I love reading the works of other poets. Maybe i can post some of my own work, once i free up some creative space...

Love both. But does it count? You'll all think I'm biased.

Its quiet epic. I think.

to green.... I don't know why i seem to write darker things. I try to be a nice person in all, doesn't always means life is nice to me though. I think part of it is that you've seen only a little of what I wirte, as I went through a phase where ALL I did was write.  Some things were certainly less dark or not dark at all.

My favorite poet is Walt Whitman.