Mando Battle Hymns

wait, this is for vocals only? do u think an instrumental part could be made? i.e. brass, woodwinds, percussion.

This is the first topic I've started so don't yell at me too much if I did this wrong in any way.

I've had this tune in my head for a couple months now and finally decided it would make a good Mandalorian Battle Hymn. I have yet to translate into Mando'a but here's the english version with the notes below the lines. BTW It's in the key of 'F' and I'm not exactly sure how to write it but the first 'F' in the chorus is actually in the next highest scale from the one you start out from

Anyway I'd appreciate any critiques and was wondering if anyone else has wrote any songs of their own.

KANDOSII KAR'RTASE (Indomitable Hearts)

<Verse 1>

Our Blood May Run
F     A#    C     C#
Our Bo-dies Fail
D#    A#_C   A#
Our Flesh May Turn To Du-u-ust
G#     F     G#   A#  C  A#_C_C#
But Ne-ver Shall Our Hearts Give In
F   A#_C     C#   D#   A#     C    A#
For They Be-long To Us
G#    F    G#_A#  C  A#

<Chorus>

We March Fo-or Ho-o-onor
A#   F^   C#_C   C#_C_A#
We March Fo-or Vic-to-ry
A#    D#  C_A#  C_A#_G#
We March A-as Bro-o-others
G#   C#  A#_G#   A#_G#_F#
To-ge-ther All As One
A#_A_F     C  C#  A#

<Verse 2 same notes as 1>

Through Col-dest Nights
Through Bur-ning Days
Through All That Hell May Bri-i-ing
Our Bat-tle-cries Will Ne-ver Cease
Our Voi-ces All Shall Ring

<Chorus with the word 'Sing' in place of 'March'>

<Verse 3 same notes as 1& 2>

We Bat-tle In
A Thou-sand Worlds
In Wars That Are Not O-o-ours
Yet Man-do-'ade We Re-main
Though Scat-tered Through The Stars

<Chorus with the word 'Fight' in place of 'March'>

Oooooh,mind if I print it out so me and my Vod can practice it?(we like singing war chants at Mc Donalds,it drives em crazy lol)

Wow impressive i would never be able to make somthing as good as that .