Trials of the jedi

Name: Master Zax
Class: Jedi Master and Council member
Force powers: force speed, force mind trick and force push
WOC: one single sided lightsaber
color: green
species: jawa

history: he was razed on the planet of tatooine, when he met his master. he was trained in the art of the force and built  his own light saber at a very young age. he then became a master and a council member when the clone wars started. he is a council master and a teacher to his newest padewan and is a general in the clone army.

Now Villimar, I see your point, but don't run him off.

okay villiemar, if your so perfect and smart then solve this problem:
what is the chemical formula for sodium hydroxide and water.

Kyale, Villimar, let's not start trouble. Kyale, try to stay on topic and try not to post twice in a row. And Kyale, Villimar was trying to give a helpful suggestion, not to insult you.

((new at this whole message board rp thing so I'm going to apoligize in advance for any mistakes I may make))
Name/title: Darth Ventris
Class:Sith lord
Saber style/color: Double bladed, Orange
Powers:Lightning, Choke, Speed
species:Iridonian
Has no appretice....yet.....

*shakes head* Why does there always have to be someone like this? Ah well, time to get to work. I took a glance at this kid's responses, and there was just no way I could keep my mouth shut on this one.

Kyale....I'm not sure who you think you are, and I mean this with the utmost seriousness. I quote:

"okay, but if he gives me any more "constructive critisism" then im going to give his whats coming."

Hmmm....more than a few problems with that one. Firstly, if he is compassionate enough to give you constructive criticism again, you'd do well to take it to heart; from what I've seen, you need all the help you can get. Now 'give his whats coming', there's a doosie for ya. Once you crack through the fragmented grammar and spelling, that sounds a wee bit threatening. And you're threatening him for...? What, exactly? Giving you advice? Call me crazy, but when Villimar said "no offense", I think he meant to avoid any immature squabbles like you tried to start.

Give him what's his (adapted to standard English)? And what can you do, exactly? You, my fine young friend, radiate immaturity, or "newbishness" as it is often times called on our wonderful world wide web; and to avoid getting that confused as a simple insult against you, I'll give a supporting quote:

"okay villiemar, if your so perfect and smart then solve this problem:
what is the chemical formula for sodium hydroxide and water."

.......are you serious? Nevermind, I'll just shake my head and leave it alone, just reading that statement alone should be enough proof. I am, however, perplexed by your ability to spell hydroxide without a problem, yet you can't spell raised, you're, criticism, or even Villimar's name.

In pleasant conclusion Kyale, you need to remember your boot size, and try not to buy them a few sizes too small. You spell horendously, that is not an insult, that is not a taunt, that is an honest-to-God fact. You're not the first member to do it and you won't be the last, but you are one of those people that desperately needs to copy posts into Microsoft Word and spellcheck it. Villimar noticed that, gave you advice, told you not to get offended, and gave an example. It's easy to see how he was obviously the aggressor here, isn't it? Kyale, take his advice, and after that take mine.

His: learn how to spell (My Corollary: use spellcheck)

Mine: Watch your tongue, try a lot harder not to sound stupid while trying to sound big bad and threatening (chemical formulas and the like can definitely be left out in the future, for starters), and remember just how much power members like us have to give anyone what's coming: none. Villimar never had anything coming to begin with, but you're starting to build up a list, so don't be a hypocrite, please.

Simply accepting the validity of this post would go a long way towards ending this pleasantly, and I don't mean by you or I. Carry this on, and the admins will have a field day on us both, and I'm not too keen on being showed the door yet again.

((havent realy heard of clone maufacturing plants so im gona assume you meant droid))
Darth Ventris looked around slowly, searching the shadows of the undercity for the seperatist spy. He spoted him, in a small street walking to the cantina that was the meeting place. He moved quickly, as he was skilled in force speed. As he closed the distance, just another dark shadow in the undercity, the spy turned slowly and spoke "My lord," the spy said " we have intercepted republic transmissloins. They seem to be sending a group to clear a droid manufacturing plant, we are unsure of the system but we are certain that the force will include commandos." Lord ventris stood silently the only part of his face visible beneath his hood being his mouth when the spy finished speaking he said quietly, "Find the location of the plant and send them to my ship. When you do, I want the plants defence force doubled. I will  personaly lead the defence". With that, he turned not even waitng to hear the spy's reply, to head back to his ship.

1. The game may be dead because others do not find it interesting.
2. I'm sure you are going to come back.
3. No one insulted you at all.
4. You insulted them.
5. What are the titles of the books?
6. We have other Britons here, and there grammar and spelling are fine.
7. What everyone said was, in fact, constructive critisism.