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May 1, 2006 1:44 pm (Edited June 16, 2006 02:25 pm) #

OK......This is how it works. You post a part of 1 whole story in order, (and you HAVE to add you with your username in it ) Then, at the end I will put it all together and make a short story. Each person can only do 1 part of the story.

I'll start.....

Boba Fett flew his Starship, Slave1, along the space of 'The Big Isn't'. As he glided Slave1 across the system, he noticed a far off flicker of light. "And what do we have here?" he said as he tried to connect to thier transmission. "Transmission connected" Slave 1 confirmed. A red eyed creature's face appeared on his screen. "I know why your here Fett. Your trying to steal my bounty are you!!" It was the Trandishonian bounty hunter, Bossk, flying his ship,The Hound. "Well your no-hey!...how'd you get out?!" Bossk's head turned around on the moniter screen. "PIO!!PIO!!....AHHH!" A flash of blaster fire appeared onto the screen. Bossk's head, lay on the dashboard....unlively. Boba Fett watched in such curiousness to what had just happened. Suddenly, a man's figure appeared on the far side of the screen. His helmet was that of a Scout Trooper's, but painted over with a dark green pastel. His armor, the same color. His small mandalorian cape swayed freely, his blaster, at his side. Boba Fett knew exactly who this was."You!" Fett holard. The warrior responded with the same exact raspy, cold voice as Boba's. "U lookin for me?" the warrior asked. Boba Fett responded," You better believe that when I turn you in to the Empire,you will suffer much pain..............True Warrior" At that moment, the one called True Warrior disconnected the transmission.  Boba Fett took his attention away from the viewscreen, and looked out of the cockpit. He could see The Hound in clear view. The Hound then powered up tit's engines, and took off.


......Done.....
Now someone else has to continue the story, and remember......you have to put yourself in it..........I'm not much of a writer, plus I had to type this story fast at the time.But I know theres people on the boards with great talent! ;)......And I dont care how it goes, I'm just interested in what you write!! :)

Enjoy!!!

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May 2, 2006 5:37 pm (Edited May 4, 2006 11:38 am) #

Fett powered up his engines, ready to make hot pursuit after the Hound to capture his new prey. "Can't wait to see the look on Vader's face when he sees what i've got for him", Fett ramarked, but then realized that Vader didn't really have a face. "His mask reveals no emotion, and emotion is something that i don't use" Fett thought to himself as he targeted the hounds tooth with the Slave 1's tractor beam. At that moment there was a sudden jolt on the Slave 1 that sensors told to be another ship that flew soo close to it, that they nearly collided! Boba Fett scolded himself as he saw that he had turned down the alarm volume for silence purposes. The other ship immediately clutched and towed the Hounds Tooth in that split second, speeding off to escape with it's new catch. Fett would have none of this, and throttled to full while powering up all weapons. "Who would dare try and steal a Mandalorian's prey!" he thought as the pursuit began.

  Diving toward the nearby planet of Xeron 9 in the hopes to slingshot around the planet for a quick escape, the mystery ship and the hounds tooth were pursued with laser fire. It became aparent that the escaping ship would not be able to make the jump to lightspeed when Boba Fett's laser's found there mark, striking the sublight engines. After making a desperate dive to the planet's suface, the ship's innitial speed was found to be greater than the Slave 1's and Fett soon lost visual contact with the other ship. Just before losing sight of this monster, the comlink burst alive with the image of another mandalorian, this one tall with jet black mandalorian armor bristling with weaponry. "You don't have a chance Fett. I am the better mandalorian and will destroy you if you get in my way. The MandalorianSpy is the new envy of the galaxy and none can stop him", the mandalorain said as he signed off of the comm. "I'm getting really sick of these mandalorian imposters", Fett remarked with an invisible scowl.

Fett decided to land the Slave 1 outside of the main city where his foe had taken cover. Setting down in the tall dense forest reminded him of the trees on the wookie's homeworld. Boba feared that he was now hunting something much more dangerous than some mighty wookies and it would require alot more to attain these scalps for the empire. Secretly, he had added inner motivation that drove him on. Bounty Hunter imposters were a great annoyance to Fett and he would stop at nothing to find satisfaction in knowing that he was the only mandalorian bounty hunter in the galaxy. After grabbing his electro whip, thermal dets, and blaster ammo, Boba's jetpack came to life as he stalked into the night to hunt his prey on foot, through the grand city of Xeron.

                                             finished.......

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May 3, 2006 12:57 pm (Edited May 3, 2006 03:34 pm) #

THAT WAS AWESOME!! but uh........not, "the end".......hopefully? ;)
I forgot to mention that you can add your charecter however you want. You can even be an unnoticed backround charecter if you dont want much part in the story.

.....Carry on......

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May 4, 2006 11:19 am (Edited May 4, 2006 11:39 am) #

Why don't you post a second post.....and then i can make a 2 also. just an idea. Y or N?   o and btw, i changed "the end" to finished instead...my b dude   my b...

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May 4, 2006 3:58 pm #

You know........not much people are posting here, sooo..............oh what the heck. :) Go ahead!! I cant wait!

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May 6, 2006 9:08 pm #

You make one first....then i'll second on to your second one.....how 'bout that? just so i don't have to big posts in a row....

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May 8, 2006 3:11 pm #

Well......I WOULD like other people to make themselves as charector, but........they're not payin attention........so, I'll get started on it. :)

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May 8, 2006 7:39 pm #

Deep within the bowels of the MandalorianSpy's vessel lay the cages he used in transporting his targets to their doom. These were not the sanitary stainless-steel cages that Fett kept, always clean as an operating table and twice as cold; these particular cages were kept in the dark, and it was questionable as to exactly when they had last had a good scrubbing. The cargo compartment was, as a kicker, pitch black.

It was in this prison that a young man known only as The Gunslinger found himself, coming to his senses at last from a terrific jolt of turbulance undoubtedly caused by the atmopsheric exchange taking place. The young man scarcely had time to realize he was conscious before being hurled against one wall of his far-too-small cage and losing what wind he had. Wheezing uncontrollably, he drew himself to his knees, only to be thrown once again to the other side. He clutched his stomach, feeling himself about to be sick despite the fact that his captor had kept him on a starvation diet the time they had been in transit, when he was one final time flung- with more force than ever- straight into the metal door. The impact smashed his face up badly, and broke at least 2 or 3 teeth, but had the unexpected and not unwelcome bonus of also tearing one of the corroded door hinges away. Finally coming to, the troubled young man, his current predicament one of infinite complexity that is not to explained here, not quite yet, manages to bend the remaining hinge enough to slip out of, so that he was free and was thus hurled completely across the brig.

Cursing to himself in Huttese, the young man, a mercenary of sorts before coming into his current career of Professional Prisoner, picked himself up and felt his way through the dark to the ladder that would undoubtedly lead to the cockpit. Finding it at last, he clambered up to face his captor down and win his freedom in a man-to-man fight.

That was the plan, at any rate. The Force, apparently, had different ideas: no sooner had he climbed the ladder than another shudder sent his flying back down again, the force of his skull smashing the deck plates strong enough to put one even so determined as he into a deep unconsciousness.

GPI: Fondly regard crustacean
May 9, 2006 6:28 am #

NICE!!!!! i like it   i like it    i like it!!!

                                       :cool:   {MW} MS9

“(I’m) Just a fly in the ointment, Hans. The monkey in the wrench. The pain in the a$$.” -John McClane
May 9, 2006 2:45 pm (Edited May 10, 2006 12:16 pm) #

FINALLY!!!! A PERSON FINALLY NOTICED THIS THREAD!!(except Spy) :)

and ya see, I knew Gunslinger would be a cool new member! :D

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May 10, 2006 6:29 am (Edited May 10, 2006 06:29 am) #

Meanwhile, MandalorianSpy set's his ship "The Venemous" down in the western part of the city. He knew he had to repair his ship, and quickly before Fett took him down and stole the bounty from him. Boba Fett was not known to leave just a little damage in space battles, but the Spy's ship had some luck in holding together. "I'm going to need an ENTIRE new hyperdrive system....uurgh", Spy muttered to himself. He was pretty sure he knew a dealer or two that could help him...as long as you gave them the right "agressive negotiations". Remembering the still floating ship which held his prey, he set down the Hounds tooth on the nearby platform and geared up to deal with the "Caging" part of his hunt. Instinct told him to walk around the ship once to check for alternative escape routes, of which he found none. Slowly lowering the boarding ramp to the hounds tooth, Spy found an activated thermal detonator came down with it, as expected. He watched from aloft as the explosion rocketed the ship, teetering it on it's side then dropping it back down.
                     He had to used a slight burst of his jetpack to gain entry to the ship, since the ramp was destroyed, but once inside he became that fearless hunter that his father had taught him to be. Switching on all sensors, he switched between heat sensors and movement detectors, hoping to cut down on any surprises that might occur in the small tight walkways of the Hound's Tooth. Sensing somthing from behind, he turns to find True Warrior exiting the back room while tossing an EMP grenade for his feet. Spy litterally leaped forward with the second jetpack burst, catching only the tail end of the electrical explosion which only flicked off his sensors and slightly disrupted his comlink signal. Finding himself very fortunate, Spy finds a new round of bad luck as he turns on his heels to find True Warrior escaping from the ripped apart hull of the ship! His motion detector unit that he had placed across the opening had aparently gone off but was disrupted with the electrical flow from the EMP. Leaping from the hull, Spy found that his prey had found a nearby swoop, and was now escaping at high speed! Running to a nearby dealer, the mandalorian jump started a bike of his own and sped after, keeping on the heels of this dangerous warrior.
                       Back in The Venemous, a young man wakes up to find the ship deserted and himself a free man. But where is he and how will he return back to his own homeplanet and back to his former life. "I must find a transport off of this planet!" he thought to himself as he reasured himself that The Venemous's controlls were all coded and locked up. Running from the ship he goes to find his destiny in a world unknown to him.

                                                          finished.......

                                                     {MW} MS9 :cool:

“(I’m) Just a fly in the ointment, Hans. The monkey in the wrench. The pain in the a$$.” -John McClane
May 10, 2006 6:31 am #
True Warrior wrote:

FINALLY!!!! A PERSON FINALLY NOTICED THIS THREAD!!(except Spy) :D

Yep, that awesome!!! Here...i posted my second one so now it's your turn to write your second....i'm looking forward to reading it.

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May 10, 2006 12:19 pm (Edited May 10, 2006 12:20 pm) #

DUDE! AWESOME! :)

And I'm sorry if my story takes a long time to post........I'm not that good of a writer and I can be slow at times. I'll get finished with my story in no time! gtg! :)

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May 11, 2006 9:33 am #
True Warrior wrote:

DUDE! AWESOME! :)

And I'm sorry if my story takes a long time to post........I'm not that good of a writer and I can be slow at times. I'll get finished with my story in no time! gtg! :)

np dude, i'm looking forward to it....

                   {MW} MS9 :cool:

“(I’m) Just a fly in the ointment, Hans. The monkey in the wrench. The pain in the a$$.” -John McClane
May 11, 2006 12:52 pm #

OK........it's pretty short and not as good as all of yours, but, here it goes....

True Warrior didn’t know exactly what was going on. He DID know that someone or something has taken the Hound to the planet of Xeron. He walked over to the control panel, where the dead corpse of a Trandoshan lay bloody on the ground. Outside of the rathe small cockpit, he could see huge trees among a Xeron city.
“BOOM!!!”….a small explosion was heard from outside of the ship. True Warrior didn’t know what to expect, but Fett. So, he grabbed his blaster and headed for the door. “ Fett could be out there right now…….waiting for me.” He started to feel a pinch of fear. After all, who know what lay beyond the door.
“No! I’m gonna survive this!” and with that, he ran through the door , put his blaster up in position and……………….nothing……..Whew! he thought with relief. But to his surprise he saw a starship that he’d seen many times before, the Venemous. “Spy……here to collect my head are you.” He mumbled to himself. “I should’ve known…..” and he should’ve. After all, Mandalorian Spy had tried to kill him many times before, apparently, he’s come to capture him.

“Your dead to me now, Spy……………as far as I know…………………..I have no brother.”

He ran off into the north side of the city. As he was running, he noticed the planets native species. They were huge, hairy, aliens……..almost like Wookies. But that wasn’t his concern now, his motive was to avoid the Mandalorian Spy and the legendary, Boba Fett at all costs. With the thought of Fett bringing his decapitated head to the Emporer made him furious. “ That monster WILL pay for what he’d done to my people!” and off he fled, into the streets of the city.

                                                 finished....

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May 12, 2006 9:02 am #

Awesome!!!  i *especially* like the part of you and me former brothers...turned against each other.   I really want to post, but i'm going to wait awhile to see if the Gunslinger does....

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May 13, 2006 3:39 pm #

The young man lying on the floor of The Venomous's cargo hold awakened slowly, feeling the throbbing pain in the back of his skull where he had connected with the durasteel deck increase exponentially. When he was sure he wouldn't retch from the disorientation the impact had caused, he managed to sit up, caressing the grapefruit-sized lumb on his cranium, and take a look around.

The bay was still dark, but not quite so much as it had been in space. Normally this would have been a comforting thing to a man who found himself in unfamiliar enemy territory, but things become considerably less comfortable when that light is coming from angry red warning lights. The Gunslinger had never been one for spaceflight (he had never even been off his home planet before this, in fact), and he liked it even less when the only thing between him and the vaccuum of space was malfunctioning.

Still, he had to beware of his captor. Going over to the remains of his cell door, he managed to wrench the warped hunge away for a makeshift weapon: the twisted part that had been torn away made a nasty blade that would tear rather than cut. Oh well, whatever gets the job done. Holding his new shiv, the Gunslinger cautiously ascended from the brig to the main body of the ship.

The rest, he found, was also bathed in foreboding red light, and the complete lack of viewports to the outside gave him little reason to be reassured of his position. He crept along the myriad red passages, shiv in hand and bare feet making no noise as he tried his hardest to remain undetected. Mandalorian Spy was far more armored than he was, and far better armed, so the only chance he had of killing him and stealing his ship was to exploit the element of surprise and slit the hunter's throat before he knew what was happening. However, a careful examination of the entire body of the ship showed that he was either sitting in the cockpit, the more likely choice, or off the ship.

Shiv in his mouth and eyes peering over the ladder that lead to the control room, the Gunslinger discovered the captain's seat to be devoid of any presence. The adrenaline in his system gave him an abrupt let-down, and he wanted nothing but to sit on the deck and pound the floor in desperation, but he look a glimpse out the viewport and was instantly uplifted: A city. We've landed. Quite a large city, too, by the looks of it: perfect for an escaped convict to hide in until he could manage to make his way home.

Still moving as cautiously as possible, but now lacking the fear that had been there previously, the Gunslinger made his way back to the loading ramp, which he found to be locked down. He glanced around quickly, and saw a toolbox with its contents littering the floor (doubtlessly because of the tremors that had so hurled the convict around his cell). Taking up a heavy and unfamiliar tool, he began bashing the bulkhead next to the exit with as much zeal as he possibly muster. He made massive amount of noise, of course, but he had no way of knowing when Mandalorian Spy would return to his ship. He intended to be gone by that point, and so was working for speed now rather than stealth.

Having bent the plating to his liking, he picked up a wrench and managed to pry away some of the wall, revealing the raw wiring. He took one look at the mess of multi-colored wires he had revealed, then began pulling them out with reckless abandon. Almost immediately the red emergency lights went out, leaving him in pitch blackness, but he continued his efforts and was at last rewarded with the sound of the vaccuum seals that held the door shut releasing. Dropping his wrench, he leveled a kick at the ramp and was pleased to find it give slightly, showing a sliver of brilliant light from the city. Two more kicks and the wedge-shaped hole was big enough for him to fit through; he picked up his shiv, dropped the eight feet to the spaceport deck, and was gone from the sight of passersby before he could possibly be noticed.

Free from his captor but still stuck on this unfamilar planet with no money, no equipment and not even a name, the Gunslinger slid away smoothly as water into a dark crevice in the back of the docking bay. Freedom is a relative term, and he needed to continue to improve his situation before it met his standards.

GPI: Fondly regard crustacean
May 13, 2006 5:39 pm #

AWESOME JOB DUDE! I like It! :)

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May 13, 2006 8:25 pm (Edited May 13, 2006 08:26 pm) #

Yeah, great job on the post...i like it tons!!!   ja ja ja .... i guess that makes it my turn.....i'll try and get to it tommorow or monday....

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May 14, 2006 9:26 am #

Yeah, same with me......I'll get it started tommorrow. Today's Mothers day! :)

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May 14, 2006 12:48 pm #

"I can't believe I was this careless!" MandalorianSpy commented aloud to himself. "It's not like me to get soo caught up in the victorious moment." Toggling his visor to night vision, he slowed his swoop to a halt outside a small cantina bustling with costomers. He wished he had time for a few drinks, but he had decided that business came first, even if it meant chasing your prey right past the best smelling genatonic ever without tasting any. He had checked all possible escape routes of the building, finding only 1 backdoor, which was bolted and sealed for emergency use only. This would be uninviting to True Warrior since the alarm would sound if he tried this escape door. Apon entering the cantina, MandalorianSpy removed himself to a back corner where he could see every corner and the door to the cantina. Immediately he began to scan the room for True Warrior, stopping every now and then to check his memory banks on some familier looking humanoid. It appeared as if everyone decided to wear a cloak that day, making it dificult to see faces and intents. "Of all the lowlife." he remarked with surprise as Boba Fett emerged from some unseen booth at the far end of the place. Nervously leaning back in his seat, he thought Fett had missed him altogether, but soon found that his black mandalorian armor was unmistakable as a kamino dart whizzed past his upper torso. Advanced radar and slit second reactions kept him from being instantly poisoned.

                    Amazed to realize that his shot was a miss, Boba Fett sprayed laser fire into the booth, providing a deadly silence across the cantina. There was a bright flash as an explosion rocketed the building, tearing apart the wall behind the booth. "Lucky scum." Fett remarked as leaped past the empty booth. The blinding orange sun revealed no clue as to where MandalorianSpy has escaped to. Deciding to give up the search, he turned up a side alley, hoping to refresh and rethink through everything happening. Brushing the chunks of wall off of his chest plate, he found a small but noticable poison dart sticking an inch from where his flesh met the armor. "The thief must have tried to return the favor, the little sneak!" Fett though as he removed it from the already worn yet tough armor. "He won't get a shot off next time."

                                                    finished....

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“(I’m) Just a fly in the ointment, Hans. The monkey in the wrench. The pain in the a$$.” -John McClane
May 14, 2006 2:09 pm #

Good...Good....Great!! Awesome!! Keep-it-UP!! :)
I guess its my turn, I'll start tommorrow.

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May 15, 2006 10:05 am #
True Warrior wrote:

Good...Good....Great!! Awesome!! Keep-it-UP!! :)
I guess its my turn, I'll start tommorrow.

ok,    looking forward to it!!!!!  he he he....(evil laugh)

                                                    {MW} MS9

“(I’m) Just a fly in the ointment, Hans. The monkey in the wrench. The pain in the a$$.” -John McClane
May 15, 2006 1:42 pm (Edited May 15, 2006 06:21 pm) #

OK.....anywayz.....

         There he was, walking along the small streets and alleyways of the city, trying to escape stealthfuly. The dark brown robe he found in an alley seemed to have brought less attention to his presence. The robe was dusty, and worn to the core. As he exited an alleyway, an explosion had just occured at a nearby cantina, just about 20 feet away from True Warrior's location. A dark Mandalorian warrior was running down a small street, it was MandalorianSpy. True Warrior crouched along the dark alleyway. Then, to his surprise, the bounty hunter Boba Fett followed quickly after.

he he he.......Now the tables are turned brother,..........How do you like to be hunted down like the scoundral that you are.....I hope you get what you deserve… Fett then, used his jetpack to get a boost on MandalorianSpy. "He'll survuve..........he always does." a voice was heard from the darkness of the alleyway. True Warrior turned from the sudden action to see who had spoken. A figure stood in the shadows of the alley, avoiding the light. It was a young man, that had looked like he’d been wasted away in a dungeon somewhere. His cloths looked torn, as if he were in some sort of a struggle. True Warrior began to speak, “How do you know? Do you know Spy?” the young man suddenly crept along the wall, and closer to him.

“Do I know him?.........……All the torture that he has enflicted upon me..…….. he is my nightmares……………..he’s the monster that held me captive…….for all these years.”
The young man seemed to clench his fists in rage. “So……..you seem to have somewhat of, a grudge, over Spy huh?........Well do I have a job for you!” True Warrior finally stood, to fully face the man. The young man suddenly glanced up at him, and made a small grin. “What is your name?” True Warrior asked.
“They call me…….the Gunslinger……” True Warrior suddenly noticed the two guns at the young man’s side. “Huh……I can see why.”
“and I know who you are, your
True Warrior……..MandalorianSpy’s greatest enemy……” Gunslinger said. "How do you?-nevermind that now…….Ya got any ammo in those things?” the man’s fists clenched in anger once again. “ If I did, I woulda smoked that monster a long time ago..” True Warrior grinned behind his mask, at someone who he can relate to. ”Trust me, it’s not that easy.” he said giving Gunslinger a pocketful of ammo.

“Well, Gunslinger……..I have a proposition for you.” Gunslinger looked up quickly and spoke. “The deed is as good as done……how much?” True Warrior stood back in amazement to how Gunslinger could act so quickly. “Alright, …….the reward is 50,000 credits.” Gunslinger still holding the grin, acted swiftly. “Good enough for me……I will be back with his head, if your lucky, before nightfall.” And with that, he crept along the alleyways toward the direction of  which MandalorianSpy fled.

True Warrior was on the verge of escape, all he needed to do, is to find a nearby ship and he’s gone. “And I can continue my quest for Mandalorian justice!” he then scuffled down the streets.

                                                    finished.........

That was some hard thinkin.....I got myself into a couple corners writing it. BTW, if anyone would like me to change anything, just speak up.

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May 16, 2006 2:39 pm #

dude...you did an awesome job....(clapping)   i looooved it ....never fails...impress me again.   ok  so now it is theGunslingers turn....unless someone else wants to join us.....(evil laugh)   

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“(I’m) Just a fly in the ointment, Hans. The monkey in the wrench. The pain in the a$$.” -John McClane
May 30, 2006 1:43 pm #

(Ok, sorry this is so late. Too much going on recently.)

50,000 credits. How much better could it possibly get?

I would've smoked that monster for free, he thought to himself as he lay in the shadows of a rooftop, getting his surveilance on the surounding area. Now I can do it and make enough to get back home. This is just exquisite.

Of course, that's assuming he could manage to fulfill his task. Even at his best, it would be tough for the Gunslinger to defeat the devil...now he was practically naked, underfed, wounded, unsupplied, and all but unarmed. The slugs True Warrior had handed him would do if he had a perfect situation, but he couldn't afford to waste them. Thirteen shots is enough to kill, but not enough for a drawn-out firefight like was likely to occur. And in a city like this it was completely impossible to locate slugs like he one he needed. Extra ammunition wouldn't be coming along anytime soon unless he switched to a new weapon.

Ideally, however, he wouldn't need them at all. He worked most comfortably from the shadows, as a good assassin should. The right moment, the right setting, and he could kill the beast with his bare hands if he wanted to, no sound at all. Drop, snap, 50,00 credits richer.

Of course, it's always better to not take chances. And that armor might complicate things a bit.

His eyes scanned the spacepart below him. The crowds were thinning and the streetlumos were just starting to come on as the city dropped into dusk, marking the arrival of his era. He ruled the nights, despite the fact that no one else knew it. It's always best that way.

Sometime soon that hunter would have to come by. Maybe the Gunslinger would strike, maybe he would bide his time. Assassins have to be patient out of necessity, and for a setup that needed to be so perfect, he was willing to bring himself to the point of starvation before attacking. He could eat all he wanted with 50,000 credits.

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May 31, 2006 12:59 pm (Edited May 31, 2006 01:02 pm) #

YES!!!! Finaly!!! (Napoleon Dynamite) Yesssssssssssss......... :D That was cool, whos turn is it now? Cant wait to do mine!! :D

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June 1, 2006 1:12 pm (Edited June 1, 2006 01:13 pm) #

In the window of a viewport, on the ever powerful star destroyer, The Exterminator a tiny green planet lay in the distance. Through the window, the planet of Xeron was floating peacefully among the stars.Not for long... he thought as he kept his concentration on the planet. An admiral in a grey jump-suit walked in as athe door slid shut behind him. "Lord Vader, the Hyperspace transport was a success and we are ariving at the planet of Xeron, as you ordered." the admiral stood in position waiting for an answer. Vader, dressed in a dark black robe, turned his head to face the admiral. His mask was breathing ever so lightly. He could sense the unsureness in him, along with a hint of fear."Yes, Im glad to hear that the transport was  a success," the cold, dark voice came from Vader's mask.", and I can plainly see that we are in the footsteps to the right path....................but surely admiral.." the admiral looked in confusion."...you havn't come to inform me of the obvious, have you?"

Vader's stance didn't change, as his head slowly reversed back to its original position. The admiral studdered to speak again, "W-Well, surely not. There is one problem, Sir." Vader finally turned his whole body to face the admiral. "What miniscule issues have delayed you from completing your job now, admiral?" Vader stood close as the admiral's eye twitched furiously. It was his first time with Vader, and he was very nervous with all of the stories he'd heard about Vader. "Well it's just that...........nobody even knows what region the jedi-" "That wont be a problem admiral." Vader interupted. He looked in the far distance as if he were following his thoughts, "The jedi QuinLan Vos is definately on this planet. As to where his exact location is....................well if we knew, then he wouldnt be HIDING very good now, would he?"

The man wrapped his arm around the back of his neck. Vader walked back up to the viewport's window. "Leave that to me, admiral." The man then stood in perfect position."Leave me now." Vader commanded. The admiral nodded his head and walked straight out of the room.

That fool.. Vader growled at the annoyance.These useless admirals dont understand and trust the supremacy of the force.  Vader staired at the tiny green planet. He gave his attention to the left region of land that inhabbited the planet. He tried to concentrait......................there is defenatly a great source of intellect there........................and its very eventfull. Vader seemed to be confused. along with a very reconizable presence....................behind the mask, Vader's eye's widend............Fett?



                                                    .......finished.

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June 5, 2006 7:51 pm #

SWEEEEEEET   ok  Yesssssssss (napoleon d.)    i'll get to my post then.

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June 12, 2006 12:18 pm #

pretty twisted, eh? Notice QuinLan Vos has joined the party as well. So whoever wants to play him, go ahead! ;)


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June 13, 2006 4:05 am #

Far away,someone observed the Star destroyer in his cloaked ship with a smile..."So they finally found where Quinlan Vos is hiding...I was beginning to get bored....But has Vader felt the other presence?Yes...Yes,I feel he knows..Vader can't imagine what awaits his troops down there.... When he realises what happened,it will be too late.And then...then I will strike!"

Short but I wanted to introduce a char.of mine.Is it okay?

"Your passions give you strength, and through strength you gain power. You have seen it, you feel it. You must break your chains."
June 13, 2006 8:15 am #

SURE! Its fine! It is pretty short, but I WANT you to introduce your charecter! Im guessing that its a Darh Maul Clone. :lol: Its fine unless you dont introduce to use you as a Star Wars charecter, and you have to use your username. ;)

Hmmm....interesting. This is getting more and more mysterious! Keep it goin!!!


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June 14, 2006 4:29 am #

Ok,I'l give another shot:

Suddenly,the communicator beeped.He pushed the button and a familiar face appeared:"We are ready.What's their E.T.A?"Boba Fett asked."In a few minutes they will start landing their troops.But one thing troubles me....Are you capable of this?"Fett laughed:"Where do you come from?Don't you know who I am?"Then HE took his cloak off:"I come from the past...and I'm looking for revenge!I have heard of you...Boba Fett...The greatest bounty hunter in the galaxy some say.But no mere bounty hunter can stand against the power of the dark side!"Boba asked carefully:"And what is your name?I usually only work with people who know..." "You can call me...Darth Maul...Darth Maul Clone!My scanner shows that they will begin landing in 5 minutes.Are you ready?"Maul asked.Fett replied:"I'm always ready.When this is over I'l expect payment to my usual account"Maul seemed calm:"You will get your payment as agreed.200.000.000 credits will be yours after this."Fett said:"I leave you then.I must get ready for the attack"Maul replied:"Good Luck"He pushed the button again and the communication ended.Darth Maul Clone saw the Imperial transports leaving the Star destroyer and heading towards the planet.Sudenly,he seemed very angry:"Yes,go to your doom!Leave your base.And as you will get killed in this green planet,me with my loyal apprentices will board the ship and take it over!And then,my real plan begins!"

"Your passions give you strength, and through strength you gain power. You have seen it, you feel it. You must break your chains."
June 14, 2006 11:38 am (Edited June 14, 2006 11:39 am) #

Thats cool! :D Dont forget to wait for other people to take a turn, DMC. ;) I like how Darth Maul Clone had a deal with Fett, but wasnt Fett chasing down MandalorianSPy? :/ Ya might wanna add some refferences of that in there. Maybe in the communicator, DMC saw Fett fighting MandalorianSpy or something like that. Other than that, I like it. ;) I think that its Spy's turn, now.


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June 14, 2006 12:28 pm #

Okay.Sorry about that!

                                          {MW}DMC

"Your passions give you strength, and through strength you gain power. You have seen it, you feel it. You must break your chains."
June 19, 2006 6:58 pm #

Hey guys....sorry i haven't posted in awhile.   Ive been outa town visiting my girlfriend...(as you can tell by my new avatar...lol)  anyways...i wont be able to get to writing a section...so go on ahead without me if ya can. I'll post whenever im able. I'm glad to see Darth Maul Clone join in our RPG. I like the stuff he has put up so far. Keep it up ery1.

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“(I’m) Just a fly in the ointment, Hans. The monkey in the wrench. The pain in the a$$.” -John McClane
June 20, 2006 10:18 am #

Alrighty Spy! Hope you have a good time with yo GF! :) I guess its my turn now. I'll get started soon.

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June 24, 2006 12:51 pm #

Hey TW,you forgot this RPG?And it's yours LOL!

{MW}DMC

"Your passions give you strength, and through strength you gain power. You have seen it, you feel it. You must break your chains."
June 24, 2006 8:47 pm #

Didn't forget it     i dont think....just took a breather.    After all   it is alot of writing...ya know.  lol    i like it all soo far....going pretty good...

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“(I’m) Just a fly in the ointment, Hans. The monkey in the wrench. The pain in the a$$.” -John McClane
June 25, 2006 10:42 am #

Yeah, theres a lot of other RPGs going on now.

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June 25, 2006 1:01 pm #

Nah,I said it just to tease him! :D

"Your passions give you strength, and through strength you gain power. You have seen it, you feel it. You must break your chains."
June 25, 2006 3:07 pm #

boba fett shut off the comlink.imperials would drop in five minutes."This should only take me three minutes to capture this fool who thinks he's a mandalorian,"thought fett.fett prepared his whip cord.using a boost from his jets fett took to the sky.activating his motion detectors he spotted the "mandalorian"thensetting his blaster to stun he fired after the running quarry.
     
    mandalorian spy thought,"no,no he's not gonna get me this time!"and unholstering his blaster he fired wildly behind himself

    meanwhile gunslinger whispered to himself,"here he comes this is my time for revenge!"gunslinger adjusted himself for the shot that would either fulfill his revenge and make him rich or possibly get himself killed.

     boba fett noticed a slight movement in the corner of his visor.suddenly a beam of red energy nailed mandalorian spy in the chest.boba fett acting on instinct set his blaster to kill and and fired rapidly into the dark corner as mandalorian spy went down.

      gunslinger dropped his weapon he had done it.he had gotten his revenge but at its price.he had been hit twice once in the leg and once in the hand.he fell feeling joy and bringing ruin to the man that had tortured him for so long.indulging in an emotion he thought he had forgotten,joy....

      boba fett gritted his teeth.someone had tampered with his quarry.if mandalorian spy was delivered in health the reward would have been one with a lot of zeroes behind it."oh well 50,000 will do," he sighed.he called the Slave 1 with his wrist band and prepared for the coming of his ship.

                                              finished....

"I look forward to killing you soon!" - Ask a Ninja NInja
June 27, 2006 7:05 pm #

YESSSSSSSSSSSSS   a new poster under this thread...  Welcome theLastMandalorian!!!

                                            {MW} ms9

“(I’m) Just a fly in the ointment, Hans. The monkey in the wrench. The pain in the a$$.” -John McClane
July 2, 2006 7:58 pm #

Deep in the Xeron forests, in a moldy cave on the near side of the city, a man walked out in an old jedi robe. "I sense......something...." the old man walked out of the cave with his head hurting in pain. "Something is.......about to happen....." he said. Seconds later, a small familiar creature was running toward him in a hurry. "QuinLan! QuinLan!!" the pirate looking figure was jumping up and down. "What is it Verin?" the creature was still bouncing as QuinLan stood calmly. "My ship! MY SHIP!! He took my ship!! Kill him!!!" Verin had calmed down a bit, still huffing and Puffing after his run. "Who? Who stole your ship?" QuinLan had full focus on his friend's ship. "One of them! One of the Thalek Brothers!!! The ones the Empire has put a big bounty on!" QuinLan got a shiver of intentions. There is definaly something going on here....... QunLan thought as he looked upon the trees of the forest. As he looked, he saw a very familiar triangular shape. He ignored Verin and put all focus ino the sky. "Oh, no......"

:D

TW

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July 22, 2006 2:04 pm (Edited July 22, 2006 02:05 pm) #

The Empire had found him. What was he to do? He couldn't possibly get off the planet without the Imps noticing and if he stayed then they would scour the entire planet searching for him.... While Vos was thinking Verin shouted, "Hey!!! What's that?" Quinlan looked in the direction Verin was pointing. "Oh great. Just great!" Vos muttered to himself. He knew the ship all too well. It was the Slave 1. That meant Boba Fett was after him too.

"Verin I want you to take the hidden swoop and leave." commanded Vos in a cold tone. "But...." Verin said just as the Slave 1 opened fire. Vos yelled, "NOW!". Verin headed off toward the  swoop as Quinlan pulled out his lightsaber to confront the most dangerous enemies one could possibly have. Boba Fett and the Empire....

"I look forward to killing you soon!" - Ask a Ninja NInja

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