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It has taken a while but I have finished my second short story (with the first short story now becoming the prologue)
It is the longest thing that I have written. It is to long I think to put in here, so here is a link to it. I have also made some changes to the original story. I have checked the story many times and I think I have gotten as much errors out as possible.
If there is anything that you notice could you let me know please. Any constructive criticism is also welcome.
I hope you enjoy it