Topic: RPG - Coruscant attack

" Hey? have you got any weapons left sunder? " He was getting tired of people getting their weapons taken off them............

Bareth scaned an checked every gaurd he came across on his way back to the holding cells. Everyone was a match to the records on file. He was starting to think that this plan was going no where, fast. Yet, it was still their best bet if they were going to catch Sunder's accomplice. He was back at the door to the holding cell and each gaurd reacted cooly towards Bareth. He reveled in the thought that he had intimidated them. Still they all matched records that Inyri had on file.

"Let me pass." he ordered them, and they obliged.

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Inyri went on her way, roughing up the gaurds, checking Id. So far she had come up empty handed and she was anrgy. She wanted to be finished with these kriffing intruders so that she could move foward with her plan to infiltrate Black Sun. She wanted nothing more than power and respect from those around her and she wasn't going to let these annoyances stand in her way.

Inyri stormed up to a gaurd that seemed shorter than the other's she had previously checked. As she approached him, Inyri could almost sense nervousness in the air. When she moved her data pad towards the gaurds face they bolted. It happened so fast Inyri almost didn't grasp what was happening. Either she had an employee with a death wish, or she had found the intruder.

Inryi took off after her, instincts from combat training taking over. She shouted commands and directives into her comlink, telling Bareth where the "voice" was running. Oddly enough it seemed that the individual was running TOWARDS the center of the building and the holding cells, and not the exits of the building.

Inyri managed to pull out her hold out blaster whille running full out down narrow corridors in tall heels. "Freeze!" she yelled after her and shot a warning shot slightly over the person's head. But they did not stop running.

"Hmmmm. Nice place." Said Vyyk as he looked around the appartment and wondered how many armies had come through this place in the last few days. Man, with the door broken in, the window destroyed(and only some plastic to cover the hole), papers on the floor, a broken dresser, and a messed up bed, it looked as if a herd of banthas and aak dogs had come through. "Oh well, this'll work." he said as he turned the bed over and made it into a table, then rigged the place so that even a squad of Jedi couldn't get in(or out) alive.

"Bareth, hes heading your way.!" Inyri said over the comm. Less then a second after this warning, a guard sprinted around the corner. He looked like he was running from someone. He tried to run past but Bareth tripped him. He put the guard's arms behind his back. Inyri slowly stepped around the corner. She was holding a syringe. Bareth strained to hold the guard down as she approached. She stuck the needle into the guards arm and in a moment the guard's struggles slowed, then stopped. "Take him to the medbay, Bareth. Make sure he is adequately restrained." Bareth grabbed him by the back of his uniform and began to drag the 'guard' off.

Bareth was quite the asset. Satisfied that his performance was impecible so far she gave him a look filled with respect and admiration. The job had become more demanding than what she had anticipate. It was almost if the force had something to do with his arrival at her office.

She decided that Sunder needed to be seperated from her other hostage. Sunder was too dangerous to be around that one. Inyri, blaster still in hand, drew her vibroblade, just as extra threat, in her other. She went into the holding cell. She made no pretense of small talk, pointing the blaster directly at Sunder.

"You're comming with me." She motioned to the gaurd standing alert by the door, "Cuff him." She directed.
"Sunder don't try anything foolish. I'm a good shot." Once Sunder was fitted with the binders she motioned to him to move. With that she sheathed the blade again, gabbed Sunder's shoulder with the blaster jammed into his neck.

"Walk." Inyri directed. He complied. She led him into a small windowless room with just a chair and a heavy metal table. Inyri pushed Sunder into the chair and repositioned his stun cuffs so that he was also affixed to the chair.

"You have 2 minuets to tell me what you think i want to know before your partner never knew she met you."

Ronun was confused. Someone had taken Sunder and left him to rot. He was angry. He lashed out a foot at the door. It didn't budge. He kicked again. It creaked and slowly opened. He smiled and went to smack the guard............. ( can I please go now? :O  I have healed and rested enough. It's time to go :) )

(( A_A if you have any issues with this just give a shout out :D))

Bareth, returning to the holding cell after strapping the unidentified assailant in what he had just been introduced to as the Medbay, saw that the door was open and their first target was making his way out. He was certainly tired of having to rough up this guy. It apparently was going NOWHERE. And that would affect his pay no doubt.

He cought up to the individual just as he went to go smak a gaurd.

Bareth grabbed ahold of his collar, as he was apparently not paying attention to Bareth's direction. "Going somewhere? Yeah Didn't think so."

"Come on? Why do you keep popping up!" he exclaimed in response.

"Boss wants something from you. It might actually help you if you can coooperate. Like stop trying to get yourself killed? Tell me and i might not choose to beat you to an inch of your life. Save you self the pain. "

Bareth took a pair of stun cuffs off his belt and strapped the captives hands behind his back.

"Just tell me. I could ease your suffering."

Ronun sighed. He was captured again. He wanted to reason with this woman, himself. He wanted to see his family again. A tear fell to the fllor with a silent splash.......................

Name: Ben Griffin
Age: 23
Weapons: DLT-20A blaster rifle
Job: Mercenary
Appearance: A tall muscular human. outfitted in a heavy durasteel armor suit

Griffin had just been dropped into Coruscant by a drop ship, him and his mercenary group had figured there was money to be made here. letting his rifle dangle on the strap he gave out hand signals to his group to secure the area and set up an outpost.

"do it men! double time! we'll brief up later" Griffin said as he started to set up his command tent

Ronun was led down a corridor.................

Ben griffin had recieved word of an underground 'gang' of some sort opperating in the city ahead.

The team of mercenaries had took command on an old run down warehouse/docking facility.

"lex and yar'gan i need you to go and get me some intel, and see what you can learn. quite simply i dont know where to start here"

"Yes sir!" the two mercenary soldiers saluted and mounted there speeder bikes and headed towards the city centre.

Commander Ben griffin sat in his makeshift command center surveying the equipment around him and stripping and assembling his rifle in 2 minutes flat. he needed a break through and fast.

((

This is supposta take place before EP I. I'm not confidant that he could have imperial gear at this point.))

5 minutes ago...
"You got any weapons left Sunder?" Ronun inquired.
Sunder stopped and smiled "Didn't have any on me in the first place?"
"What good r u?" Ronun threw up his hands.

"I can talk, thats what i do." Sunder smiled

Now...
"you have two minutes to tell me what you think i want to know, before your partner never knew she met you."
Inyri hovered over him.

Sunder couldn't help but see the irony. Ill i have to do is talk my way out of here.
"So your trump card is a memory wipe?" Sunder looked up at Inyri and licked the blood off his lip.
"Lady im not the guy you pistol whip, im the guy you collaborate with!"

Inyri looked at him oddly "Your not going to talk your way out of this one Sunder."
"Yeah, actually i am." Sunder looked at his cuffs. "Take these off and we talk, take these off and we both get what we want."

Inyri looked at her vibro blade and lifted it to his neck "i don't trust you."
Sunder smiled at her "nor should you, but trust this- i have no love for the Hutts. Im in it for the credits, i have a  combo for a safe or maybe a locker, i just don't have the location." Sunder hesitated. "You get the location and then we find out how really real this is?"

Inyri lowered the knife she had a heavy decision to make and Sunder knew it...

((Hey Nigzy, your guys can't ride thier speeder bikes toward the city, 'cause the whole planet is a city! You might try making your base on top of a building. Just a tip.;)))

Vyyk finished rigging the place up and decided to go and snoop around that place he'd been earlier, and see if things had slowed down any...but once he got there he realised that something was going on...and this time it wasn't just the lights. There were more gaurds, more cameras, and more guns. He wondered if those other Hutt goons where in there. But most of all he wondered if the voice of his target could be the same voice of his best friend...Daric Choard. But Daric was supposed to be dead...but the voices were the same and he coulden't change that.

"Looks like this will be the first job I quit on purpose." Vyyk thought.
"And anybody who tries to kill him this time's going to be sorry, very, very sorry."

Bareth collected Ronun and led him down a corridor...........

"Fine. Talk. Perhaps I won't let you bleed out here.  But why do you think that mere credits are what I am after?"

Sunder looked a Inyri. "Who said anything about credits?"

"Ah you do have my intrest now." She replied. "Its a shame your partner won't get the benefits of it. She's just a liability. But If you have value I shall spare her life."

Ronun didn't know what to do...... " Hey! Bareth! Can you let me see Inyri? " He smiled, hopefully......................

Vyyk was set on waiting until the time felt just right. But in the mean time, he was going to start hotwirering cameras and jamming gaurds's guns. As he worked, he thought about his best friend, Daric, who had changed his name after a mix-up with the Hutts and Black Sun, then married and had some kids, who were living on another planet not far from here. He continued to break cameras and gaurds's guns.

The team of mercenaries started scouring the central area of the city, they where not coming up with anything.

"Alpha team, this is command, do you copy?"

"This is Alpha team, go ahead"

"Griffin is on his way to your location. stand by"

"roger that command, alpha out"

Griffin was making his way to alpha teams location with his elite guard.

Times where harsh, Griffin had no location or threads on anything.
he was about to take control of the front line search.
hopefully something pops up

As Vyyk was finishing rigging everything, he strapped demolition bombs all over the building, just in case, then he strapped one of the triggers to his pulse, and destroyed the de-armer. As he layed the last explosive on the roof, he looked out over the cityscape. As he steadily looked acoss it, he noticed several small groups of armed men who all had a resembalence in their armor. Strange. Then he noticed that they were searching for somthing.

"Oh well, who cares" he thought.

"But with my luck, they're most likely looking for this building, and they'll most likely come just as the action starts." Vyyk thought with humor. But as he watched an even smaller group with a very important-looking man in it met one of the teams. But then Vyyk felt a gun at his neck, and heard a gaurd say "Don't move put your hands behind your head don't move."

"Sad little man," Vyyk said, "you never put a gun to my head."

With that, Vyyk ducked, spun around while taking out his DL-18 out and blasting away at the gaurds. All three of them crumpled and fell. Too late, he rememberd that those gaurds didn't even have working blasters. Too bad.

( lol, I like that, Seco. Very funny! )

Ronun asked again, more kindly this time " Bareth, can you take me to Inyri? I have to discuss my freedom. "..............

Griffin met with his group commanders, he had just under 24 men here with a further 16 back at the outpost.

"sir, i was scanning the area and i saw someone firing up on that building, centre of axis about 750 meters away!" a scout informed the commander.

"Good work soldier! he patted the girl on the back, listen up men, where heading up there! form up in two teams of 12, mine alpha yours bravo we'll take different points of enterance, rules of engagement, dont fire unless fired upon. roger?"

the soldiers stood at attention and shouted "yes sir!" then with a salute they gathered in there teams, finally a lead they could follow.

Griffin and his team cautiously approached the tall builiding, it was massive!

"teams on further assesment you are too split up into smaller groups of six men mine will now be Alpha 1 and Alpha 2 yours Bravo 1 and Bravo 2, over" griffin said over the command net.

"roger that sir, out" The bravo team leader replied

Griffins team was tasked with taking the main doors, he needed to know what security was like.

"Yur'ak slice into there computers if you can and get me some intelligence!"

( Nigzy, whose side are you on? Mine or Si Tiriran's? :) )

Ronun gave up. He couldn't get this  man to talk. Unless..... He saw some credits on the table. He pretended to side-fall and reached them to put them into his pockets. He smiled. This was the simple part.........

( im on your side :P )

The mercenaries reached there points of entry (PoE) and began assesing the security,

"Alpha 2, Bravo 1 and Bravo 2 this is Griffin, PoE's are secure. GO GO GO!" Griffin ordered over the comms.

One of the soldiers in Alpha 1 (griffins squad) launched a flash into the foyer of the entrance of the building.
The three guards in there where stunned.
The six men entered the room taking up defensive positions then fired at the guards. The guards stunned and outgunned retreated all though one stayed

"please dont shoot please! i mean no harm!" he plead, Griffin approached him.

"Hmmm.......No!" Griffin raised his blaster and fired of a round into the guards neck.
"cant afford any slow downs"

"Sir this is bravo 1, we've got IED's here! there rather smart, there strapped to some of the supporting foundations"

<improvised explosive devices!? the building was rigged!>

"roger that bravo 1, disarm it, All bravo, your new objective is to find these explosives and disarm them! you each got demolition experts so use em' this building aint going unless i find something i can sell or use or what ever!"

6 more armoured and better armed guards entered the room

"FREEZE! lower your weapons and you wont be hurt!" they demanded.

Griffin still standing in the middle of the room took out a cigar and lit it. then he clicked his fingers.
O'connor his heavy weapons expert rose from his cover with an assault cannon firing off multiple blaster shots it got 4 guards straight away the other two took cover. griffin still smoking his cigar got down and one knee and with his DLT-20A fired off three rounds into the desk a guard was hiding behind, the armor piercing shots troe through the steel desk and into the guard.
the other was hiding behind a reinforced wall, Griffin nodded to one of his soldiers who then threw a thermal detonator into where the guard was.......BOOM!

"this is Alpha 1 to all teams, area clear"

he signalled for his team to go ahead, one of his men had been shot in the thigh,

"MEDIC! see to him!"

"he needs evac sir!"

"This is griffin to command, we nede CASEVAC on my location. NOW!"

Griffin nodded to his wounded commrade.

"im going ahead with O'Connor the rest stay here wait for the CASEVAC and secure this area"

With that Griffin and his assault cannon wielding soldier went off into a dark corridor, only the cherry from the cigar griffin had was visible, he tossed it on the floor and switched his shoulder light on, glanced back and gave a thumbs up.

( hey thanks. I will give you a karma, if you give me one, k? :D )

Is anyone still posting on this thread. Note* -  sorry for spamming AA. Just wondering why people dont anymore.......

Green, the Karma/Rep system is NOT for you to go and give people karma/rep as a deal. Ok? Lets hope you understand this better then you understand spamming.

GHF, here is my answer why this promising rpg- is currently stagnant. A person that creates an RPG is a defacto facilitator, or more simply put-has to push the story along at times. while you have offered up a great idea, you have to foster it as well.
your character "Ronun", is a compelling punching bag- but you need to help establish the w's of our character motivation to get the info out of ur head. and i understand you r younger and may not grasp everything that im saying- but these r reasons that we r at a stand still.

so find out whp ur character is- why is he hiding a shipment, is he blackmailing a hutt? interact w/ the characters around you. Ronun started to work w/ Sunder for a minute and gave him four numbers? what r those numbers?
and try not to conjure up anymore skiff guards, ok?

push the story homie.
its ur world.

(Let's get back to the story before it dies :(  And I'm also helping to build Ronun-Daric's background, so I am trying to help. Time for action!)

Vyyk felt tuned up after his one way shoot-out, and finished cleaning up. Then he heard blaster fire from the door way down below, and later he heard a thermal detonator explode somewhere in the building. Fun. He dropped a concussion grenade on the roof and took cover. BOOM!!! He then lowered himself through the roof and began sneaking around. Hearing blaster fire from somewhere, he decided to go away from it, and looked around a corner where he saw a very bruised Daric asking a gaurd for somthing and then slipping and grabbing some credits laying on a table.

Vyyk set his blaster to stun for eight minutes and shot the gaurd unconcious (Sorry Bareth). He went to them and quickly tied him up, then put him in a storage locker. He wondered what had happened to the last guy he did that to.

He finished locking the locker, then turned toward Daric, his best friend, who was supposed have died a few years after he'd been married, but had accidently messed with the Hutt's and Black Sun.

"Daric." Vyyk said.

"Vyyk?" said Ronun.

But then they heard more blaster fire and Vyyk tossed his friend the gaurd's gun and yelled "Follow me!"

(Hey Bareth, since you beat up Ronun so much, I didn't figure you would mind getting knocked out from behind for eight measely minutes befor you bust out. ;))

( ok thanks seco - To Seco. AA I will not give anymore karma to people as a compliment, just if they do something good - To AA. I will try to make the RPG more fun, Cujo. :P  - To Cujo. )

Ronun was freed by his old friend , Vyyk. His memory was starting to come back after those hard, confusing years. He and Vyyk raced to the control panel. They had to destroy it, before the door could open,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,

((No, I mean when you barter with it, as in 'I will give you one if you give me one.' Thats not what the system is for. Also, I've kind of lost interest in this RPG. Blame all the other ones I'm in))

(( Ok, I will. But why are you leaving?? :( ))

I just dont find this fun anymore, perhaps its the lack of a good plotline

(Hey AA, Does that mean that when you get out of that locker, I can kill you?)

(( Seco, dont bother...... he'll probably say yes :P ))

Ronun ran to the control panel with Vyyk. He and I were trained to run fast without having a stitch all the time.............

((Hmmmmm...We need a really good plan, what say we end up at your old apartment and do somthing there, or do you want to have a humdinger of a fight in here?))

(( here's the excellent plan.........we go to my broken, busted apartment and then some bounty hunters  break in and we duel them, k? :) ))

((Hey, i'm just going to try one more post...but I need to clear something with Cujo 1st)

(( AA, please stay! Si has Pmed Seco to say what it's going to be like, k? ))

((Really? Hey Ronun, if we do use your plan of going to the apartment, we'll have the edge on them cause I rigged it up, remember? And when will Si PM me?))

(( In time. )) can we please stop posting privatly, sort of. It's also spamming, if you do it constantly. Thanks. ))

Vyyk and Ronun got to the control panel. "What now?" Ronun asked. "Just do sompin'" Vyyk replied

((It's been a week, and Si hasn't PMed me yet...))

Si has lost interest in this RPG. As have I.....I think I might execute my plan later...If no one has posted I will just edit this.

((Yeah I had some ideas that I thought were kinda cool to run with, and develop with the other characters, but I feel like they really were never going to happen the way things were going. It was the same thing over and over. Sorry. I do not wish to offend.

I also apologize if there was some other form of misscommunication around this. I don't know what I would be PMing Seco about exactly. It is not my intention to be mean or hurt anyones feelings with any of this.))

((Masterchief said so. It look like I'm going to have to hit the gas agian and keep this thing from dieing -on the next post. (I need to think a little.)))

Inyri Saal heard the horrible noises that were now coming from the warehouse. She was tired of this. Somewhere something had gone terribly wrong. She knew this was a dangerous ambition, but she thought that nothing risked was nothing gained. It had gotten her so far as it was, why should it change now.

“Is this in anyway in league with you Sunder?”

“Your guess is as good as mine.”

“Then who ever this is will be after you as well. Fight with me and Bareth what ever you need it shall be yours. Second only to Bareth.” The mention of Bareth this time brought a warm feeling into her heart. It surprised her and confused her, but at the same time didn’t.
This time she heard and felt the small explosion. Fear spread across her face for the first time in a long time. The situation was out of control, something Inyri was unaccustomed to. She unlocked Sunder.

“Go figure out what’s going on. Take out all you can.” she told him as she handed him her modified hold out blaster. There was no time to get his stronger weapons back to him now, every moment counted. Inyri would have to make due and find something.
“Bareth? What’s going on? Where are you?” She called into the comm. “Bareth? Is Daric with you?” There was no response. “Bareth” She momentarily panicked. She would need his skills if she were to succeeded at this point. She could not ignore that fact, and she had already gotten used to his presence and manner.

“Bareth? Are you alive? I’m coming to find you.”

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Bareth heard a voice. “Where are you?” He couldn’t yet understand all what he was hearing. But it sounded like Inyri. Then he remember what had happened. It flashed back at him. The intruders, Daric, the stunning. He pained him to let Inyri down like he had. She was one of the very few that he respected in his lifetime, and twice a beautiful as any other woman, despite her hard ways. “Bareth?” he heard her say again, not with anger in her voice, but concern and fear. “Are you alive? I’m coming to find you.” With that he regained his wits and started banging and pushing around in the small locker in hopes that Inyri might hear.

Bareth was in a bad situation. He was locked in a locker. Therefore he didn't have much room, and he was starting to cramp up. The lack of space made it hard for him to try to break out. He had about half a foot of room to pull his arm back, before he punched forward, trying to jar the lock enough for it to pop open. He slammed his elbow against the inside of the lock for what felt like the hundredth time, but the lock remained adamant. He didn't have room to try to shoot it. The damn locker was probably magnetically sealed anyways. He heard someone outside the locker, he could only hope that it was Inyri he heard. He slammed against the wall and called out, hoping she heard. A moment later he was rewarded by the sound of the lock disengaging, a moment later the door opened, and out he fell. He landed on the ground  with a thud followed by a grunt. He tried to stand, but he was tied. Inyri ducked down quickly and pulled the vibroknife from its sheath on his belt. she activated it and cut through the ropes securing him.  He slowly stood, other than the headache he was fine. Inyri seemed relived to see this. He would try to figure that out soon, but now he had something else to deal with, he checked his weapons, everything was there. "Thanks," he said. "We need to get out of here. It isn't safe."

if sunder is still alive...let me post tonight...i need to read to catch up

Daric ran with his friend Vyyk to a control panel. Vyyk suggested that he had to do something..........

He shot the wires teeming down helplessly. The blaster helped, a lot! There was noise, and the place filled with guards. Daric somehow used the force to stun all of them at once. He smiled at his friend and unclipped a 30cm silver handle from his belt. He ignited it. It was green. (( my favourite colour )) He slashed through the circuit and destroyed it. He beckoned to Vyyk and they set off to the main entrance. Daric remembered a cruiser still docked there earlier. He smiled again, while running. His memory was coming back................

(( Okay? Have I stretched it, by a little now, cujo? :) ;) ))

Inyri let Bareth out of the locker. She was releaved to find him alive. Somewhere in her race to find Bareth her priority's changed. She didn't care about Black Sun, the Hutts, Daric, Sunder or even power. She just wanted quiet and Bareth. Odd enough for her, as those things were the all importaint focus of her life. To prove her self better than the rest and have everyone know it. But now she just needed to live long enough to get her and Bareth out of the building. It was smarter than just fighting needlessly. Sunder might buy them some time.

"Thanks. We need to get out of here. This place isn't safe."

"You read my mind. Are you force sensitve too?" Inyri smiled at Bareth. There would be time to tell him how she felt soon enough. "We get out of here, then we can regroup. We need to make it to my crusier. Get off planet. Head for somewhere quiet."