Topic: RPG---Pure Fantasy

Okay, I'm new to this stuff so...I'm not that good at this.In this RPG, your character is either a superhero, supervillian, or could be total rubbish if you wish. All that will depending on your preference. List the name of your character (real name optional), age (optional), powers and/or weapons, appearance, secret origin, & personality(optional, because we'll probably find out by the way your character act anyway).

NO ALL POWERFUL CHARACTERS AND NO GOD MODE, that would be really cheap.

Becareful don't do impossible things, if someone just blew up a magical toilet, don't just walk into it on the next post.

You can kill characters you create but you can't kill other people's characters unless they say they have been killed in battle with you. However you can wound them, but cannot cut off their body parts, for example, arms, legs, etc unless they allow you to do so.

You can have any weapon you want but you can only have what your character could physically carry, so you can't carry a weapon about 72 meters long.

If you have sustained many wounds you will have to either get medical help or eventually die.

Please follow the storyline, and evil often wins, so at the end if all the good guys got blown up don't start moaning about it, ok, let's start.

Story Background Information: Basically, the world is full of fantasy creatures, vampires, werewolves, dragons, wyverns. Of course, there are also hunters of these creatures, protecting the human race. Lately, an ancient race named Tomb Guardians had been awoken for unkown reason. They are now undeads with knowledge of ancient magic and technology.

Here below are the abilities of the races, Tomb Guardians are not included for they are just servants of Chaos and his trusted warriors.

Half-Demons: Has part demon powers like great strength, but his/her appearance as a normal human, anyone that chooses to be a half-demon can choose which side to take, for they can still control themselves MOST the time.

Demons: Has strength far greater than normal human's, will only obey it's master, loyal but cunning. Anyone that choose to be a demon will automatically be a super villain, for they were born to be evil.

Greater Demons: Has strength unable to compare with normal human's, will act as it wishes and does not obey anyone weaker than itself. Possess some god-like powers like levitation, causing lightning to strike, etc. Cannot control hunger for bloodshed.

Humans: Master of weapons, humans are more civilized than any other races, able to use more complex strategies during war, and can perfectly control themselves, they can be---

NECROMANCERS: Necromancers sold their soul to demons/Greater Demons in order to earn the power to bring back the dead, but in return they must serve the Demon/Greater Demon for eternity.

WARRIORS: Experts at using melee weapons.

RANGERS: Experts at using any kind of range weapons, guns, bow and arrow...etc.

MAGICIAN: Humans with powerful magic under their hands, would be more powerful than any other human, except their magic doesn't work in some certain places.

Vampires: Able to stand under sun-light, and their teeth only go sharp when they are drinking blood. Able to control lust for blood but will die and temporarily loses their powers if they stopped drinking blood. They are almost like super-humans that has to drink blood to survive, they have superior strength (not as powerful as demons), and super running speed.

Werewolves: Able to control their forms MOST THE TIME, has superior strength to vampires, except they don't have as fast running speed.

E levs: Intelligent creatures that are usually peaceful unless threatened, with powerful magic they can protect their race well from extinction.

Dragkions: Hybrids of dragons and humen, able to breathe fire and communicate with dragons. In human form most the time, except they can transform into a dragon whenever they want to. Hunted by dragon slayers.

Character: Chaos
Affiliation: super villian
Appearance: Stands 6'11", a demon wearing barely any armor, with wings on his back. He's suppose to look like this: http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p305/darrenshan1022/9.jpg
Weapon: A black huge sword about 4 feet long and 2 feet wide. Because of it's size, only Chaos with his demonic strength can carry it.
Powers:
Demonic Strength: As a Greater Demon, Chaos can have a sudden boost of demonic strength, but takes more damages than normal.
Dark Magic: As a powerful master of dark magic and a Greater Demon, he has power to summon his demonic servants and his undead minions.
Secret Origin: Created by chaotic gods eons ago, born with the power to kill and the destiny to turn the world into a chaotic, dark, universe full of bloodshed.

CHARACTER LISTS:

VILLAINS:

Character: Chaos
Affiliation: super villian
Appearance: Stands 6'11", a demon wearing barely any armor, with wings on his back. He's suppose to look like this: http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p305/darrenshan1022/9.jpg
Weapon: A black huge sword about 4 feet long and 2 feet wide. Because of it's size, only Chaos with his demonic strength can carry it.
Powers:
Demonic Strength: As a Greater Demon, Chaos can have a sudden boost of demonic strength, but takes more damages than normal.
Dark Magic: As a powerful master of dark magic and a Greater Demon, he has power to summon his demonic servants and his undead minions.
Secret Origin: Created by chaotic gods eons ago, born with the power to kill and the destiny to turn the world into a chaotic, dark, universe full of bloodshed.

NEUTRALS:

Character: Drakus
Affiliation: To himself
Appearance: Dragon
The black one for it’s body, and the Red one for it’s head and wings:
http://cid-086a971ab6dab929.spaces.live … lideshow=0
Tigershark like coloring; gray skin with dark stripes down the sides; black on backbone ridge and most of tail
Age: 225 *still young for a Dragon*
Weapons: Breaths fire — Very strong legs with talons — Tail has spike like ridges for flail — Mouth full of teeth   
Magic: None offensively, but highly resistant to all types
Personality: He’s a dragon............. Nuff said   

Name:Khaan
True Name: Akizx'nbhdh
Species:Half-Demon
Age:497, was recently dormant in an ancient tomb.
Affiliation: Neutral
Apearance/weapons:  http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p305/darrenshan1022/d607b1a0.jpg
Magic: Is a master of lightning and fire, can also influence weak minded people. Is also able to defend himself very well.
Personality: Will do anything to defend his true name, for if someone knows it, then he is theirs to command. A strong warrior, and a mercinary of sorts. Is usualy very serious.

"GOOD GUYS":

Name:Blight
Age: No one knows...not even Blight
Affiliation:Justice, he was a blimey grim reaper. (More on this later)
Weapons: Whip,Scythe,Throwing daggers,Sickle,Magic.
Attitude: He's an x-Grim Reaper that smokes. What do you think he's going to be like?
Appearance: He looks different to all. ( For instance if he's saving your life you may see the winged one, but if you his prey then you might see the evil looking one.)

Name: Draaxus
Age: 80 (looks to be in his twenties)
Appearance: He is tall, heavily muscled, and has very dark black hair.  His eyes are deep browd, and he has a scar across his neck.  His Draconic form is a dark fiery orange, with eyes of emerald green.
Affiliation: Human
Race: Dragkion
Personality: He cares for humanity, and their capacity for good, and will oppose the forces of Chaos until the end.  He knows that he may die in due time, and acts slightly quiet and morbid, often keeping his own counsel.

Name:Jack.( thats it just Jack.)
Age: 22
Appearance: Tall,Strong,just look at the pic *(Thank a lot Adeptus Astartes for the hero maker link I'm lov'n it)
Affiliation: Human
Race: Human Warrior (He is the chosen of the human warrior raise and dose not know magic but his skills are not compared.)
Personality: Somewhat fun/cocky (think Peter Parker) but can be serious.

curious about where you got the idea for this...................  But if you got it where I think you might have, thanks for making different enough that it can coexist with mine   :)   And if this message is leaving you totally clueless, then congrats on a very creative idea!  I’m in

Also, just so I’m sure, is this based on the Warhammer series of books/games, or is this totally free form Fantasy?  I haven’t read the books, but this sounds a lot like the game ‘Mark of Chaos.’  Just checking; will create a character when I know

Thanks for the comment, actually, I have played Warhammer 40K, but I have never read those books, So the idea was original, and 100% made by me (lol, I just registered like one hour ago)

  And, yep, it's total free fantasy...I just made it like that, so the characters have more freedom and able to do whatever they want instead of destined to die because the ending of a book say so.

* lol.  Didn't think you took it from Warhammer;though it did look to me like you may have based this on it, which would be fine.  Accually, I was talking about an idea I have for an RPG in the chat room, and thought you might have gleaned some of this from there.  But no matter; looks like a good one, and I'll take your word for it that it's original   :)   Will post a character soon*

Oh...ok, well I'm gonna start really soon, maybe in...ten minutes or so, or as soon as someone creates a character and does something...and I forgot to mention that you're allowed to have maximum of two characters.

Character: Drakus
Affiliation: To himself
Appearance: Dragon
The black one for it’s body, and the Red one for it’s head and wings:
http://cid-086a971ab6dab929.spaces.live.com/photos/cns!86A971AB6DAB929!244/?startingImageIndex=1&commentsExpand=0&addCommentExpand=0&addCommentFocus=0&pauseSlideshow=0
Tigershark like coloring; gray skin with dark stripes down the sides; black on backbone ridge and most of tail
Age: 225 *still young for a Dragon*
Weapons: Breaths fire — Very strong legs with talons — Tail has spike like ridges for flail — Mouth full of teeth   :P
Magic: None offensively, but highly resistant to all types
Personality: He’s a dragon............. Nuff said   :D

Drakus soared over the wooded hillsides.  The search for food was getting harder.  Wild game was scarce here, and the few farmers that had tried to make a living here had either given up or had been eaten. They did try to move into MY home, after all, he thought.  But it wouldn’t be his home for much longer.  It was time to move on. 

Human’s had been scarce in his territory the past few years.  Perhaps there was something wrong.

A war again, no doubt.    Not that such a thing bothered Drakus.  He was content to let the humans slaughter each other to their heart’s content.  He had on occasion even joined in their squabbles when it was a benefit to him.

Perhaps it was time to do that again. Food and shelter in return for killing some humans and any ‘pets’ they might bring with them might be good for a change. The rumbling in his stomach confirmed his thought.

Turning south, Drakus began the flight to the walled city of Bruun

Name:Khaan
True Name: Akizx'nbhdh
Species:Half-Demon
Age:497, was recently dormant in an ancient tomb.
Affiliation: Neutral
Apearance/weapons:  http://www.ugo.com/channels/comics/heroMachine2/heromachine2.asp

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((Tripple click on this post, copy into the load box, delete all but the code.))

Magic: Is a master of lightning and fire, can also influence weak minded people. Is also able to defend himself very well.
Personality: Will do anything to defend his true name, for if someone knows it, then he is theirs to command. A strong warrior, and a mercinary of sorts. Is usualy very serious.

Khaan stepped into the light, he had been entombed in darkness for over four hundred years. A group of mortals had opend his crypt, relasing him from his prison. To repay their kindness he had killed them. He surveyed the land, it had changed completely.  It had once been a dark forest, it was now a barren wasteland. A mountain had erupted, spewing forth its smoke fire and ash. Fitting, he thought for my return.

Ralin Drakus: So...are you just a dragon or are you a Dragkion (read first post)?

Adeptus_Astartes: Affiliation? Super-hero/villain or are you nuetral?

Guys...I'm new to this stuff, how do you make your words slanted?

Anyway...so...

Chaos opened his eyes, he was in the middle of a wasteland, he did not know where he was. He can recall from his memory, being feared by the gods, he had been kept from the mortal world for a millinium. Now, something had awoken him.

  He was floating in the air, in front of him is a human in black robes, with a hood covering his head. As a master of dark magic, he could tell that is a dark priest.

"Foolish human! Releasing me from the holy bonds was mistake, and there will be a heavily paid price for your mistake!"

  The priest murmured something under his breathe, a black bubble of magic surrounded the priest, protecting him from Chaos. Chaos laughed out loud, as he wasn't any other demons, he's Chaos...made by chaotic gods eons ago, feared by all mortal beings, and a master of ancient dark magic. Black mist slowly swarmed around his right hand, then suddenly a bright blinding red light shot through the black mist. A black huge sword about 4 feet long and 2 feet wide appeared out of the blood-red blinding light.

  Chaos tightened his grip on the blade, then drew an arc in the air and hit the priest magical shield. The bubble was shattered like broken glass. The priest looked up at Chaos, the blade made a cut on his forehead.

"Interesting...you weren't cut into half...maybe you will come in handy...

I might have missed something but what is this no time of is it supposed to be mid evil? iow can I use a gun or is that taboo?

Khaan dropped to the ground, shattered glass aound his boots.

"I have heard you need a warrior." He said, speking to the king that stood before him.

"How dare you show me such disrespect!" the old man yelled. "Entering my city, breaking into my throne room, and now speaking to me with such disrspect! I am Bralon Czrrechten! King of Bruun!"

"And I am Khaan, that is all you must know, aside from the ability I have to kill you and your men faster then you can blink. Your status does not affect me, old man."

The guards in the room drew their blades, and stepped forward, Khaan drew his and stuck, dealing death to the kings elite guard in a matter of moments. Soon half the guard lay dead at his feet. "Halt!" Bralon shouted, his guards freezing instantly. "I shall take that as an demonstration of your skill. All you must do now, is kneel."

"I kneel for no man." Khaan snarled, his red eyes dulling slightly behind his helmet.

"Very well, I belive your services would be useful."

It's kind of mideval, but in this RPG the technology is more advanced so you can use guns. So the time doesn't affect what the character will do, they can do anything...so like it could be at any time just in another universe.

If anyone needs a picture for their appearance, you can choose one out of my albums if you couldn't find any: http://s131.photobucket.com/albums/p305/darrenshan1022/
Please don't use picts that ppl already used.

Would somebody mind to be a good guy? Cuz if everyone that's currently playing is evil or neutral so then later in the RPG everyone will just be on Chaos' side or on their own, and nobody wants to help the humans.

((I will be a "good guy".))

Name:Blight
Age: No one knows...not even Blight
Affiliation:Justice, he was a blimey grim reaper. (More on this later)
Weapons: Whip,Scythe,Throwing daggers,Sickle,Magic.
Attitude: He's an x-Grim Reaper that smokes. What do you think he's going to be like?
Appearance: He looks different to all. ( For instance if he's saving your life you may see the winged one, but if you his prey then you might see the evil looking one.) Also I have two pic's:

Ignore the name at the bottom it was going to be his name but then I found Blight.

((Light is dark, and dark is light.  I will join the Blight))
Name: Draaxus
Age: 80 (looks to be in his twenties)
Appearance: He is tall, heavily muscled, and has very dark black hair.  His eyes are deep browd, and he has a scar across his neck.  His Draconic form is a dark fiery orange, with eyes of emerald green.
Affiliation: Human
Race: Dragkion
Personality: He cares for humanity, and their capacity for good, and will oppose the forces of Chaos until the end.  He knows that he may die in due time, and acts slightly quiet and morbid, often keeping his own counsel.

Yay!! Finally some good guys! Well, evil boss guys are beaten up last...so I'm gonna make another character soon so I won't get too bored.

Chaos' nameless servant kneeled before him, and looked down on the ground. They are at a destroyed unholy relic. It was in the middle of the dessert where he had awoken Chaos, the greater demon raised one arm high up at the sky, darkness spread across the sky and covered the sun.
Chaos had summoned the night apon them, The moon was gleaming with bright red light, then suddenly focused the light into red beam that shot straight at Chaos' servant.

"From now on, your name would be...Nightmare." The beam slowly dissapeared, then Nightmare slowly stood up on to his feet. Now, he's a necromancer, unlike any other kinds of magician, his magic has no limit and could even summon the dead from their grave.

((This is NOT my other caricature my bro is going to use my profile to post instead of having to make a new one. also this way I don't have to be logging in and out all the time (witch is a huge pain.) and if he's busy for a while I can post for him.))
Name:Jack.( thats it just Jack.)
Age: 22
Appearance: Tall,Strong,just look at the pic *(Thank a lot Adeptus Astartes for the hero maker link I'm lov'n it)
Affiliation: Human
Race: Human Warrior (He is the chosen of the human warrior raise and dose not know magic but his skills are not compared.)
Personality: Somewhat fun/cocky (think Peter Parker) but can be serious.

Affiliation is not where you fill in your race, it's where you fill in if you're a good guy or not. So even if you're a human, that doesn't necessarily meant that you're a good guy.

  And please, post your brother's username, so it's not like everyone can just come in here and play his character. I'm gonna make my second character.

Name: Dean
Species:Human
Age: Unknown, around his 20s
Affiliation: Let's say he's a good guy.
Apearance: http://i131.photobucket.com/albums/p305/darrenshan1022/darkassassin.jpg
Weapons: throwing knives, two katans behind his back, guns (in a truck that he owns), and daggers
Magic: Able to create and manipulate the element fire with his right hand.
Origin: A left-handed ninja-warrior that was once an assasin, therfore he's master of all kinds of weapons. His right hand had merged with a gem that was created out of hellfire, he can't always control it, so he wrapped his right hand in bandages and charms.

  The dragon slowly walked around the hill, Dean locked his eyes on his prey. He had to kill this dragon for the sake of where he lived, slowly drew the two katanas from his back. He hopped down the hill, the beast sniffed the air and turned his head upwards. Just before his blade hit the beast's face, fire shot up from it's mouth. The katana in his right hand flew into the air as he crashes on to a rock behind him. The dragon was focusing it's fire power within it's mouth, Dean quickly toke off the charms on his right hand and held it out in front of him.

  The flame stopped before it reached him, then suddenly was turned into black smoke. The dragon was confused and was ready to charge at him and bite him into bits, but before it can't act he was burned on fire and the flame once again turned into black smoke. Dean's assasin uniform was burned, he was wearing a short sleeves black jacket with a long strip of white bandage in his left hand. His right hand burning with hellfire. The beast charged at him, roared some sort of war cry as the ex-assasin launches himself at it.

  Blight slowly dropped from the sky, still having cigarettes in his mouth. He saw Dean sitting next to a huge pile of ashes. Then noticed that his weapons scattered everywhere and the long burnt strip of bandage in his left hand.

"Dean, you unleashed the power of the gem AGAIN? I don't want to take care of your mess anymore." Said Blight.

"Blight, do you really want to come near me when I have a loaded gun in my hand?" And he showed him the gun that was in his left hand. "The last time we met, you stole my truck, and besides you lost your job ages ago, when was the last time you have to clean up my mess?"

"Dean, sorry about your truck, but at least you got it back. Uh...Dean, heard of what happened to the city of Bruun yet?"

I thought it was humans vs demons but I guess not, Jack is a good guy. alos I DID fill in my in my race as "Human Warrior".
As for my bro's username he dosn't have one. For those of you who know me better this is NOT FMR this is my little bro. if you need to talk to him by name you can call him "Jack".

It is Humans Vs Demons, if it's an NPC and he/she is human, they have to be on the human's side unless he/she is under a contract with another demon character that belongs to an actual person.

  So techniquely the main characters have choice of which side to take unless you're a greater demon etc which makes you automatically be evil. Therefore the next time you post, please tell me whether you're a good guy or not, I guess this makes everything clear...so everyone, please read the first post CAREFULLY.

Hey are we going to RP or what?

I know, but so far nobody had done anything besides like...3 people...Alo! You must post! For humanity! For justice! For this RPG to have a plot line!

  Dean sat on the clock tower, he stared at the kingdom of Bruun from high above. Nothing was unsual, why did Blight send him here? He looked down at his blade, like a mirror, Dean can see his own face, and a man holding a sword was about to stab him through his heart. Dean blocked the bladed with his pistol without turning around.

"So...you're the new mercenary under the king's service?"

Sorry I didn't read the end of your post... :o
I'm going to post in a little bit, I'm trying to get some work done right now.

Drakus’s huge frame dropped into the Mayor of Bruun’s  personal garden.  Folding in his wings, he strode over to the Mayor, who was in his nightshirt holding some of his flowers.

Pathetic human; no wonder you always need help

Four of his personal guards sprang into action.  Two were swiped aside by Drakus’s tail; another fired a shot that was deflected by his heavy scales.

With a wall of flame, Drakus incinerated the shooter.  And then with a gulp, swallowed the other whole.

Making a run for his bedroom, the Mayor tripped over a rake and fell to the stone walkway. 

Dakus leapt and stood over the crying man.

“SILENCE!” Drakus roared! “If I was here only to eat pathetic humans, I’d be in the streets devouring your subjects, not looking down on your weak frame.”

“Then what do you want from me!?!” the Mayor begged through his tears.

“Your city is in danger; though this is of small consequence to me, we may be able to help each other.”

“How?”

“In return for my fill of food and shelter, I will offer you my services if your city is attacked.”

“How do I know you wont eat all our food, then leave as soon as danger comes?”

“Because you have my WORD!!!!” Drakus roared.  “I have served this city in the past; search you archives.  I serve faithfully and well until the contract is fulfilled.”

Getting to his feet, the Mayor wiped the tears from his face.  “I remember now.  When I was a small boy.  Perhaps we can come to an arrangement.”

Blight seemed to appear out of thin air onto a ledge of the tower. Blight looked at the two and said "I see you two know each other." "What?" ask Dean. "Well I only assumed you must have been best of friends the way the mercenary tried to stab you."
"I see a "ex" assassin sitting on a clock tower waiting for something. That is suspicious. But the fact that the king will be passing by in a half hour makes me sure that he was planning something." Said Khaan.
Blight looked at Khaan for about two seconds  "...Well Khaan. I'd say-" Khaan interrupted Blight." How do you know my name?"  "I just went over the list... the list of people you've killed. It's not short, and it's not pretty. Well I will speak on Dean's behalf and say that he is not trying to kill the king...Are you?"
"No. I'm not."
"Oh. Good."
Khaan looked at the two. "I have better things to do then talk to ex-assassins and "half angels"
"As do I" Replied Blight  "But I have brought us hear for a reason. We all can sense the danger thats coming and we all know there will be battle...so I thought that we should get some practice against "challenging" foes.
So I voice we spar."       "Go."
At that Blight swung his scythe at Dean's head and threw his half smoked cigarette at Khaan. Blight said a quick spell and the cigarette exploded into Khaan's face.

"Come on. You aren't going to let an old "half angel" beat you?"

I don't get about the part about Dean's head...anyway,

Khaan wiped the ashes away from his face, pull out two daggers and launches himself at Blight. A wall of flame appeared out of no where in front of Blight, Khaan spun around before he hit the flame and intended to stab Dean in the heart. He blocked it with his pistol again, Khaan dropped his dagger on his left hand. Khaan slammed his hand on to Dean's face, he felt a bolt of eletricity hit him from Khaan's hand, and knocked him off the tower.

Dean swore under his breathe, shot out a fire bolt at Khaan's chest as pay back. He quickly pulled out his dual katanas and stab it into the stone tower trying to slow down the speed of falling down. He looked up, Khaan had his hand high up into the air as thunder strike on to his hand and eletricity circling around his arm. He jumped down the tower and slammed his hand on to his bleeding face.

Blight, cursed as he toke out another cigarette light it in his mouth. He slowly flew down the tower, the floor was cracked and there was a circle of concrete that curved down at Khaan and Dean as the center. He looked closely, Dean's pistol in his left hand was on Khaan's throat. But Khaan's eletricity-powered hand was two millimeters away from frying Dean like an egg.

"Close one...too close...didn't expect him to have powers like that." Thought Dean.

((typo it should say AT Dean's head))

((Just one quick thing. I am NOT trying to point out YOUR typos I'm just using your post as a example. I just want to say that I had a sort of hard time reading the way you were writing. I think you had a typo or two, witch is fine I do that too (just look at the top of my post.) But what I had a hard time reading was when you would say HE attacked and then HE blocked, or something like that, Witch one is "HE" is HE Khaan or is it someone else? This is the part I'm talking about: "...slammed his hand on to his bleeding face."
Whose hand and whose face? when I was first reading this I thought that Khaan punched himself in the face!
What I'm saying is for all of us (me included), I think we should all be sure to "re-read" your post after you post it so we can see anything that dose not make sense and fix it.
also next time if you would just post what your character is doing so that Khaan and Blight get to fight too that would be nice.Thanks for reading this off subject post. Now back to the RPG.))

Blight looked down at the two on...well IN the ground. " You two have seemed to take after each other like nothing." Just then the king's court marches by. "What is the meaning of this!" Asks the king. "You majesty. Let me explain, I am Blight, I am here to help with your protection." The king looked at Blight and the others he
also thought back to the beast that he had just met with. "Yes, It would seem everyones out to "Help" me these days." "Quite. But I thought that it would be best if we..." Blight said this with a sweep of his hand two Dean and Khaan (who were sill in the rubble). "...were able to get some good practice we would be more efficient." The king looked at the tower and the crater. "Well next time do it OUTSIDE this city!" "Of course" said blight and with that he turd to the two on the ground and said "Who's up for a pint?"

I agree, as it seems we all have typos...but uh, I'm quite sure I spelled daggers right.

Outside of Bruun, they had unfinished work to wrap up. Dean had already taken back his weapons that were scattered everywhere, such as his katanas, daggers, and more. He drew his katanas (Alo, it happens to be katanaS because there's two of them) flames sizzled on them. Khaan made a fatal mistake he should have never made, he blinked. He heard Blight yelled out Dean's name, as he opened his eyes, one of the flaming katana was inches away from his neck. Khaan didn't dare to move, but then he noticed Dean's eyes had flip to the back of his head and there was smoke coming out of his back.

  Dean fell flat on his stomach, unconcious. Khaan looked up, a gray dragon was on the tower they were fighting on, and he could see smoke coming out of his mouth.

"Nobody from the outside shall harm any human within Bruun!" Roared the dragon.

Ummm. Did you see my post? The fight was over. I assumed you got you weapons before going to the tower. And we were "Sparing" witch means the same as training or practice so we were never trying to kill each other.

Also I wasn't saying you spelled it wrong, spelling I can deal with, it's the grammar that I'm having a hard time getting.
You said "pull out two daggers" when it should have said "pulls out two daggers"  Also I was calling you on the
"...dual katanas and stab it into..." because it should have said "...stabbed (and because there are more than one katana) them into..."
  I thought I had explained this but I'll show you again. "...slammed his hand on to his bleeding face."
Whose hand and whose face? when I was first reading this I thought that Khaan punched himself in the face!
What I think you meant was  "...slammed his hand on to Dean's bleeding face."
You see how one can get confused.

((Ok, i think i'm out for now, because my character is being RPd by someone else. Listen, the problem with this, is that you dont know what my character would do. Why do you seem so sure that he would attack Dean?  I dont think he would, and he would not hold such disdain for Blight. He himself is a half demon, in case you havnt noticed. Good concept, but I'm out for now. Sorry.))

NO don't leave me!!  I only started the fight I didn't do anything!

lol, you made him agreed to start sparing. He's suppose to be neutral...we kind of made him on our side. A_A  come on, we didn't do much besides made you nearly killed my character! How about you do something evil like betraying us so you go neutral again?

Alo: The reason I made A_A  nearly killed me is I want him to stay neutral, cuz his affiliation for his character says "NEUTRAL" as if on nobody's side so let's say he was trying to use 'sparing' as an excuse to just kill me or something.

This rpg is sort of dieing. If people beside me and rc1022 start posting I'll be glad to post more but when it's only the two of us it's a little boring.