Topic: The Gate (My fan fic teaser)

Ok, so not really a Boba fett one, but its based of Stargate Sg 1, the popular SciFi channel show

Here is the first section for Chapter I
Here are the Character list so far.

Colonel Matthew Freeman: Team leader

Major Logan Keller: Demo Expert

Captain Ashley McCullough: Tech Expert, Ancient computer expert

Dr. Brad Stride: Gate expert, Ancient Linguistic 

The Stargate activate and the unstable wormhole shot out 10 feet, then sucked back in. SG 26 walked up to the gate, the rest of the team walk through with out stopping except one person. Colonel Matthew Freeman stared into the wormhole. He has never seen anything more beautiful. He had been recrutied by Colonel Jack O’Neil to be SG 26’s team leader. He steped throught the Stargate into the abyss. He came out the other side and said “I think Im going to puke” His team mates just laughed at him “You will get used to it Sir” said Logan. “I sure hope so Keller”

More to come, this is going to be a REALLY long story.

Tell me whatca think.

I think it's pretty good, even though I don't watch Stargate SG1, Atlantis, ect.

It's been a long time since I've watched SG1, but I happy to be reaquainted ;)

I saw it once...I think...

There was also the film (which came first) with Kurt Russell sporting a very bad haircut.

Sounds good i whatch SG-1 but its rarely on in the UK.

I'm going to start Chapter 2 today, so it will be pretty cool.

Pretty good start, ner vod! :)