Topic: The Hunt

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September 17, 2006 11:25 am #

Ok so i posted this a long time ago, but never got it finished here is the new version


Boba Fett awoke to a Loud Booming. He was staying in Jabba's Palace for a couple days while Slave I was getting a new paint job. Boba got dressed and went to fid out what the booming was. He traced the sound to be comeing from the throne room. And there he was, a big, fat slobe. Boba hated Jabba, he ordered people around and made thousands of credits daliy doing it too. The sound came from under the throne room trap door. Jabba had just got a new rancor. He normally had smaller beastes in the hole. Mabey he wanted somthing more entertaining. Boba did not care. "Fett, your ship is ready. And I put a new Bounty in your logs." Jabba said. Boba walked out to the hanger, there she was, with her brand new paint job. Boba made some cheks to make sure that everthing was ok. They he started the engines and blasted away from Tatoonie. He was glad to be in space again. Jabba said the he put information on the new Bounty in his computer logs. So Boba went to check his logs, and sure enough it was there.
Boba opened it and could not believe what he saw.


teaser. I'll post the rest when i'm done.


Peace

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AvatarMember #22
September 18, 2006 6:45 pm (Edited September 18, 2006 06:54 pm) #

Ok! here is the whole story. Tell me what you think. Remember this is my first one.

                      The Hunt


Boba Fett awoke to a Loud Booming. He was staying in Jabba's Palace for a couple days while Slave I was getting a new paint job. Boba got dressed and went to fid out what the booming was. He traced the sound to be comeing from the throne room. And there he was, a big, fat slobe. Boba hated Jabba, he ordered people around and made thousands of credits daliy doing it too. The sound came from under the throne room trap door. Jabba had just got a new rancor. He normally had smaller beastes in the hole. Mabey he wanted somthing more entertaining. Boba did not care. "Fett, your ship is ready. And I put a new Bounty in your logs." Jabba said. Boba walked out to the hanger, there she was, with her brand new paint job. Boba made some checks to make sure that everthing was ok. They he started the engines and blasted away from Tatoonie. He was glad to be in space again. Jabba said the he put information on the new Bounty in his computer logs. So Boba went to check his logs, and sure enough it was there. Boba opened it and could not believe what he saw.


"Garr" Boba said out loud. He rememberd Garr. He had betrayed Boba to the Jedi and almsot made him lose Slave I when they were 10 years-old. He was wanted for one hundred fifty thousand credits. He started shearching the Holonet to see what Garr had done. After a few minutes he found what he was looking for, a list. It said that Garr was wanted for a murder on Bespin, Stealing priceless metals on Aarugau, and kidnapping on Godo." Well, he has not been a good boy" Boba said. He tracked Garr to the Isis system. "He must be hiding out in Onderon." He said to himself. Boba wondered if he should hunt Garr. After all, he was his first friend. His father had said "A bounter hunter has no room for friends, only allies." Boba would Decide what to do when he go to the Isis system. He punched in the cooridents for Onderon. Hyperspace Activated and he felt a rush, then saw the stars start to get smeared. He decided to take a nap on the way there, since he was awaken that morning.

He awoke in the Isis system. There were scanning ships ever where. "Onderon mut be have a civil war again" Boba said. He Activated Slave I's cloacking devise. He would have to fly slower so they would not pick him up. He headed for Duxn, so he could head to Onderon easier. He landed in a clearing on Duxn and got out of Slave I. He walked for a little bit till he found a huge structure. He went inside the outer walls to find old bodies littered on the ground. The bodies were wearing some type of armor, he went up to one to find that they were old Neo-Crusader's. Boba was suprised that thier bodies would still be here. He got up and went inside one of the buildings to a bedroom. He found a Beast in the room. Boba shot it, in the room he found a suit of Red Neo-Crusader armor hanging on the wall. He took it and put it in a bag he had found on the floor. He headed back to Slave I to begin hunting Garr. He hung the Armor in Slave I's main "Lobby". He started the engines and headed for Onderon.

He landed outside of the Onderon walls, so he would draw attention to himself. He used his jetpack to get into the city, he landed behind a building. He headed for the cantina to start his search for Garr. While walking to the cantina he saw alot of people staring at him, a couple people ran. "That cant be good" Boba thought to himself. He was about 300 feet from the cantina when a Onderon officer said "Outsiders are not permitted to carry weapons." "Not going happen man!" Boba said back. "Then your under arrest!" the officer said. People by then were watching the arugment. Boba put his hands above his head and "let the officer take him to a building to search him". The officer shut the door, and was dead instantly. He hid the body and went into the cantina without resistance. He went inside and asked the bartender who to talk too, so he could find somebody.

Garr had found out a week ago that he had a bounty on him. We walked around his messy apartment. He started to cleap it up. He thought that if he hid out on Onderon, that nobody would know him, or find him. He heard that his old friend Boba Fett, or Teff as he knew him, became a bounty hunter. He wondered if he would be hunting him. He hoped not, Boba was known to be one of the best bounty hunter in the galaxy. His apartment was almost clean: it wasn't very big after all. One bedroom, a small kitchen, and a tiny living room. But he was fine with that, he could afford one much better, but he did dont want bring atention to himself. After his parents died, his life went down hill. He had been reunited with them, but they were killed in space by pirates.

The bartender said he needed to talk to Cale Cass. He said that Boba could find him in the Market Square. Boba had a quick drink and left. It was dusk by the time he got to the Market Square. He asked one of the merchant's about Cale Cass; the merchant said that he was 5 stands over to the right. Boba went over to find Cass selling fruit's and vegetables. Boba asked if he was Cass, the man said yes. "I'am here for information on someone." Boba said to Cass. "Follow me" Cass said back. Cass lead Boba to a small table be hind the stand. Fett asked if he knew a guy named Garr. "Yeah I know Garr" Cass said "Where is he?" Boba asked. "He lives in the small apartment complex F, go talk to the manager" Cass said. Boba started to leave "Hey! you owe me for the info I gave you buddy!" Cass yelled "How about this, I dont cut your fingers off or kill you." Boba said in a calm voise. "Of course Fett... Happy Birthday!" Cass said in a very scared voise. Boba headed back to Slave I for the night.

Boba awoke the next morning, ate some food, put his armor on, and headed out to get Garr. He got 10 feet when 12 Onderon soldiers poped up.One of them said that Boba was guilty of the murder of a Onderon officer and was uder arrest. Boba took quick action. He ignited his jetpack and fired a quick volley of bolts at them. 4 of the 12 droped dead. The other 8 fired widly at Boba. He saw that they had grouped together. He fired a wrist rocket and took out all but 1. The mas droped his weapon and raised his hands. The mas said "Please sir, dont kill me!" Boba knew that the officers were paid very well. "Give me 500 credits and I wont kill you." Boba said to to the man. The officer gave Boba the 500 credits, and Boba shot him in the face. Boba headed for apartment complex F. He did not use his jetpack to get over the wall this time. Onderon military had put sentrie guns up because someone reported seeing a mal fly over the wall yesterday. Instead, he walked around the wall for awhile and found a small door.

He pulled the door of with great ease. He sent a probe into the door, it went into the small tunnel for a little while till a vent went downward and lead into a bigger tunnel. At the end of the tunnel was a door that read "Elevator" Boba brought the probe back, and headed into the small tunnel. He got about 100 feet and fell down the vent till he hit the ground in the bigger tunnel. He got up, made sure nothing was broken, and headed for the door. He pushed the button for the elevator. He waited for a while till it finally came. He went in and pushed the button that read "Street level" It took a long time for the elevator to get up that far. He finally reached the streen level, steped out of the elevator, and the elevator droped. He heard the crash a minute or two later. "Glad I wasn't in that!" Boba said to himself.

The apartment complex wasn't very far away. He went from building to building till he got behind the complex. There was a door that lead from an emergency exit. He opened the door slowly and found a hallway leading to the front desk. He walked up to the frond desk and asked for the manager. The women was a little worried but called for the manger. The man came out startled, but he lead Boba into his office. Boba shut the door and asked where Garr was. "H-he's on the 10th floor, in room 534" the man said in a scared voice. "Tell anyone I was here, and I will find out, and come and kill you" Boba said. The man nodded and Boba headed for the stairs this time. He got to the tenth floor and headed for room 534.
Garr had seen a shadowy figure going from building to building till it stopped behind the apartment complex. Garr grabbed a blaster and put in his coat, and ran down to the elevator. He pushed the button for the basement, so that if his hunter was still on the ground floor he could not just grab him. The elevator went pretty fast, too fast for him. He got to the basement and grabbed his speeder bike. he started it up and took off out of the building and into the street. He turned his head only to see a man jump out of the building and ignite something. "He's flying!" Garr thought.

Boba had walked to Garr's room and knocked. No answer. He broke down the door and searched the apartment. "Where are you Garr? you cand hide from me forever" Boba said louldy. He heard a speeder outside and went to the window. He saw Garr flying off on a speeder. Boba broke the windo and jumped out and ignited his jetpack and started heading for Garr. He saw Garr's reacting and Garr sped up. Boba headed for the roof tops so he would not lose Garr. He saw Garr swerving through traffic he slowed down thinking that he had lost Boba. Boba went to a differernt roof to see where Garr was going. He stopped in front of a cafe. Boba went down to the speeder and disabled to the engine. He walked into the cafe to find Garr sitting talking to the cafe owner. Boba walked up to Garr and said "Hey Garr" Garr jumped up and pulled the blaster from his pocket and pointed it at Boba's head. "Remember me? Boba asked "Should I?" Garr asked in a cheap voice. "Yeah you should, we had lots of good times on the Candaserri" Boba said. Garr was stuned. Boba took the moment to smack the blaster out of his hand and grab him. Garr tried to fight back, but Boba was too strong.
He took Garr back to Slave I and through him into a cage and locked the door. He sat down and looked at Garr. "What do you want with me? Garr asked "You bounty was pretty high, so I took the job." Boba said. "Ar-are you going to kill me?" Garr asked. "Mabey, your worth more dead than alive" Boba said. Garr was silent, scared to death. "But I think I will kill you, after all, you betrayed me to the Jedi when we were on Bespin!" Boba said angrily "But I had to!" Garr said. "Give me one good reason NOT to kill you!" Boba said. "I'm rich! I have 1 million credits easily!" Garr said. "Give me 200 thousand and I wont kill you" Boba said "Here take my card and scan it into your account." Boba did, 200 thousand credits transferred easily. Boba gave back the card, Garr ripped it up. "Thanks for the credits Garr! prepare to die!" Boba said with a laugh holding up his rifle.
"But you said that you wouldn't kill me if I gave you credits!!" Garr said, "Yeah well I lied! thats the kind of person I am now! Boba said. "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!" Garr screamed as Boba shot him. Boba sealed the cage so it would not stink. He got the the cockpit and headed for space. Onderon Fighters followed him into space, and began firing at him. Boba destroyed them quickly and headed for Jabba's Palace. He got there, and brought Slave I in for the landing in his reserved spot and landed nicely. He bagged Garr in a body bag and brought him to Jabba. He showed Jabba Garr's body and got paid 150 thousand credits. He had got the job good! He go 200 thousand form Garr, 150 thousand from Jabba, and 500 credits form some stupid Onderon officer.

Three days later Garr got a message from Boba saying that all went well with Jabba, and that he believed everything. Garr smiled, Boba was a good friend.


Thanks for reading

September 18, 2006 7:02 pm #

That, was, Beautiful.

BD

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September 18, 2006 7:28 pm #

ditto on that, well done.

"I will bet all my Star Wars guys. Whoa, whoa, whoa, wait! Except Boba Fett. No matter how sure I am, I never risk the Fett man."
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AvatarMember #22
September 19, 2006 8:22 pm #

Thanks guys.

September 19, 2006 9:49 pm #

It was interesting. I liked it. Good job.

"Stop whining. Before you really get me irritated."
--Boba Fett

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