Topic: Naruto Fans

So are X-rank jutsus kinjutsus?

most of them are sealing techniques I believe, I've only ever seen the one though.

Akira walked with new comrade and they both had a conversation of where their next destination was going to be. Jinnai explained to Akira that a missing Ninja was to be brought back to his village. Jinnai also stated that there was going to be fierce compitition, so the task was going to be quite difficult.
Whle they were walking they had supper (Ramen with miso) , soon after that they went onto some intense training.This part was very difficult for Akira because he was very tired for all the little sleep he had last night. Later they stopped by a creek to get some water, and they contained this water in some plastic containers.

Jinnai stopped at the river. Trying to get as much water into his canteen as possible. They were headed toward Grass country in hopes of finding Ren. They had a little time though, Akira needed as much training before then as could fit into the mission.
"Kid, can you walk on water yet?"
"Do what?"
"Walk on water, it's a basic technique I want you to learn."
They spent an hour working with that, Akira slightly close to the mark when he started. But never really getting there in the hour. He could stand on it, but he couldn't walk on it.
"We'll try some other time, I guess."
His stomach was still troubling him about the ramen for some reason. He didn't feel like training at the moment.
"Okay then, show me what you can do Akira."

Drawing closer!

Musari shakily got to his feet, the hero water still doing a litle pain. He continued his trip through the forest, until he heard voices.

"We'll try something else I guess.'
"Okay then, show me what you can do Akira."

Musari stealthily moved towards the voices. The voices' owners were two ninja, a hunter-nin from the hidden mist and a missing-nin from the hidden leaf. Musari stood back, observing these new enemies before fighting them.

He had to make sure he found Talve Ren. Noone else could.

The lives of everyone he cared for hung in the balance.

Next: Mist Ninja duel!

Jinnai was paying more attention to Akira than the are around him, a few eyes watching but not the usual amount. He was aware of about forty percent of the area around him. And that waterfall ninja happeend to be in that range. He just didn't pay attention to him, more concerned with the environment to find some thing he could exploit. Outside of the river and trees, there wasn't much to talk about.
"Akira, I want you to listen carefully, go down the river a ways and practice. Where the water is calmer."
"Okay sensei"
The kid walked off, Jinnai had more room now. He wouldn't end up killing his new student in mix of things.
"Alright, I know you're there, what peurpose do you have with me? And a warning, no Waterfall ninja has ever beaten me, none of them."
He kept his sleeve long, he wouldn't need the amplifier.

Mist ninja duel!

"Alright, I know you're there, what peurpose do you have with me? And a warning, no Waterfall ninja has ever beaten me, none of them." The ninja Jinnai said.

"Well," Musari said as he lept out of the trees "so much for prefight banter. Listen bud, Nothing personal, but I can't have anyone else get Talve Ren. Not an option." As he spoke, he signed. When he finished, the water of the nearby river rose and began to take form. It took the form of a giant behemoth, seven stories tall, ready to crush Jinnai.

"Sorry mist-nin, but this is your last fight."

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Meanwhile, a third ninja observes the whole fight, cloaked from any possible eyes. Even thousand eye jutsu.

Next: the duel continues: musari's bag of tricks!

The water came crashing down on Jinnai's head, the waterfall ninja approached the spot where the body should be. It wasn't there.
"Water clone substitute."
Jinnai was in the closest tree, looking down on Musari. Jinnai pulled a kunai out and threw it at Musari. It hit, and then turned into a log.
'Substituion jutsu"
Musari was right behind him, he slammed his amplifier into the ninja, the sound enough to drop them both out of the tree. Jinnai stood up first. He raised one hand into the air, the other near his chest.
"Hidden mist jutsu"
It was thin, he wasn't able to concentrate enough. Although the both of them looked like they were going to lose it at any moment.

The duel continues: Musari's bag of tricks!

"Hidden mist jutsu."

The water from the river transformed into a dense mist.

"nice try." Musari said as he signed some more.

"Moisture vacuum jutsu."

Musari held his hands out in a cone shape, as the moisture in the air swirled into his hands, the mist rapidly deteriorating.
Jinnai stood before him, kunai in hand. Musari kicked him in the stomach, sending him sliding across the ground.
Musari closed his hands, dispelling the water.
"Now my turn for the spooky 'you-can't-see-me' attack. Bringer of Darkness style."

Darkness poured in from nowhere, covering everything.

"That's not all!" Musari's voice boomed in the darkness. "Silent Homicide jutsu."

Jinnai got up on one knee, focused his remaining chakra. He'd never be able to see no matter what. So instead, he'd use the water he knew was there. He could use one more water clone, and with that he walked his way to the water. Standing on it for a minute, dropping into the water, water clone still there. He pulled himself out, reversing the affects of his bloodline trati and masking his presence weakly. He felt the "death" of the water clone. And pinged his amplifier in just the right direction. He had to hit himself to escape from the genjutsu bind. Musari had the advantage for now. although he'd hit both of them, he was the close one.
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Alright, I'm done posting for a while.

Apart from that, I'm gonna sort through some things and decide about the amplfier.

I apologize; I am at my aunt's in Florida this week, and I will not have enough time to role play.

Today I watched the episode in which Zabuza died (I missed the first airing), and it was... words fail me. It was awesome. That reminds me, Zabuza is a lot like Boba Fett. They are both ruthless and heartless at times, they both seem to have a lot of honor, loyalty, and morality (in Zabuza's case, almost only at his death).  He also seems to be very deadly and feared.

Zabuza was my favorite villian, it sickens me he died to quickly in the series. Or the fact that Haku was the last of his family able to do the crystal ice mirrors. Although he's in all of the Naruto clash of the ninja games.

Haku looks like a girl IMHO. I was shocked to find he wasn't!
But yeah, Zabuza was awesome.

It was such a touching ending ,haku are you crying?

It was slightly more dramatic in the anime

i remember that now, i have a subscription to shonin jump, but i have put off reading the last few issues lately. Though that has nothing to do with this scene, since it was near the beginning...

I just get the issues after they come out of Shonen Jump, I've only got the first three though.

For what it's worth, I'm glad the artist did that scene between Naruto and Haku in the forest.

(Tavle Ren)
"Hunter Ninja? If that was an issue."
He glared down at the Grass ninja standing before him. He was more annoyed than anything. He already knew about the Hunter nin chasing after him, and then someone had to tell him what he already knew.
"Sir? Should we intercept them for you?"
"If you think it's worth your time, go ahead, they won't survive this mission anyway."
Talve Ren stood up, and watched the grass ninja leave. Maybe the four other ninja he'd trained would be able to do something, it didn't matter. And with that, he made preperations for a more important agenda. A new tool stronger and sharper than the ones he used now.
The dark chambers he worked in matching the equivalant of his character. Empty and listless. He strove for something he couldn't see, something more he couldn't get a hold of. He just might have found it this time, he felt more alive than usual.
Tavle Ren; the ninja with a mist head band around his neck and sound headband on his forehead. The listless wandering ninja, who did as he pleased if only it would make him happy. With no real love of anything but the next thing around the ben.
"I can't see the future and what it will bring. But that's the best part of life."
The only part of life to care for.

Musari's last stand!

Musari closed in for the attack. He popped up behind Jinnia and slit his throat. Or at least he thought so.The Jinnai he attacked turned into a puddle of water, and Musari was blasted by a soundwave, courtesy of Jinnai.

Musari fell to the ground, the Darkness dissapearing, he didn't have enough chakra to sustain it. Jinnai stood above him, ready to kill him. Musari couldn't use the hero water, the aftershock would surely kill him.

"You win." Musari began. "Go ahead & end it. Better you than-"

"Than who, Musari?" a third ninja said as he lept from the shadows. "Better than one of us? You should have known we would find you, Musari. You should have known we see if you failed, and since you obviously can't do it, I'll have to tell the master you failed. You know what happen's to those who fail. They die. They're loved ones die. Hope you said goodbye to your family, Musari. It's a shame. You had such a cute daughter, such a nice wife. They'll be dead by the time get back, if this ninja doesn't kill you. That's what happen's to those who betray the Orochi's Eye." Said the ninja. He wore blue shinobi robes, an impossibly long red scarf,and a hunter mask that had the bottom cut off, to reveal the wearer's nose and mouth. "See you in hell, Musari." The ninja said before sprinting away, back the headquarters of his organizaton.

"No." Musari uttered as he lay there. "Jinnai, wait." he said before Jinnia killed him. "Please don't kill me. I'll assist you in getting Tslve Ren if you help me fend off agents of my organization."

"'The Orochi's Eye'?"

"Yes. Please help me. The ninja was right about my family." Musari said as he began to cry. "It's-It's too late for them! Please Jinnai, help me take those murderers down! I beg of you!"

Next: Jinnai's decision: Will Musari join him?

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Traits of mystery ninja:

Cloak of Invisibily teqnique (ninjutsu)

Chidori (ninjutsu)

Jibaku Bunshin (Suicide Bombing Clone) (ninjutsu)

Magen: Jubaku Satsu (Demonic Illusion: Tree Bind Death) gentusu

bloodline trait: Chakra distribution. (distributes his chakra into objects arond and brings them to live under his control.

zabuza was 2 weak

How was he weak? He killed about ten deadly mercenaries and Gato with a kunai in his mouth. He was also the first person to see Kakashi's Sharingan more than once before he died.

You also should not post twice in a row.

Also, no flaming, please don't waste a post just to root for a character especially if it's rude to someone else. And I agree with Draco, Zabuza wouldn't have been called the Demon of the Hidden Mist and part of the Seven Swordsman along with Kisame who is Itachi's Akutsuki partner if he was weak. That Zanbato of his weighs just about as much as he does or more as well.
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Jinnai helped the ninja up. He hadn't had the chance to follow the other one with an eye. Not that he had the energy to do so.
"Well, there's nothing we can really do now Musari. We could try to catch up but it wouldn't prove anything both of us are about ready to keel over anyway."
"So what do we do?"
Jinnai looked about.
"Well, I'm not about to follow that ninja. But...I guess we're heading to wherever your family lives. I doubt he'd be headed there right away. Scout's have to report back to base or whatever before anything. You lead the way...I guess I'll follow after I find Akira."
He called the chunin with a whistle, gave the short version of the situation and they were off. Musari in the lead. As they went Jinnai played with steel wire he'd probably have to use later.

(I also appologize)
My internet is having major problems and I'm lucky to be on right now...

(The "mystery ninja"'s name is now officially Shishioh.)

Shishio bounded through the forest, headed back to Orochi's Eye HQ. He lept from tree to tree, expertly leaping onto the branches, moving swiflty. Suddenly, something caught his leg and he plummeted down to the ground, but he did not hit the dense forest floor. No, whatever had caught him streched and held him, like a bungee cord.

Shishioh looked up. Above, sitting in a tree, was a portly waterfall ninja, clad in a black leather jacket, matching pants, spiky red hair, and black goggles with yellow lenses. His amazingly long, prehensil tongue held Shishioh's leg in a tight grip.

"Hello, Tokagaro." Shishioh said, annoyed that his master had sent his old rival to ckeck on him.

"Hello yourself, Shishioh." Tokagaro said around his tongue, cackling in his slimy voice.

"Listen tokagaro, let me down right now or I'll slice off this mutant tongue of yours."

Tokagato did so without complaint.

"Now then, Musari has failed his mission and  will probably be coming this way soon. I think it would be wise if-"

"Yeah yeah, take 'im out if he comes this way. Got it."

"Good." and with that, Shishioh continued his trek back to his HQ.

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Tokagaro's stats:

bloodline trait: Tokagaro's clan are amphibious, so they have the aforementioned tongue, and can breathe underwater, stick to walls, and speak to amphibians.
Hyper tongue lash=taijutsu (delivers quick, slapping blow with tongue.)
constricting crush =taijutsu (wraps tongue around victim and strangles them/ crushes their bones.)
Dokugiri (Poison Mist)=ninjutsu
Venom sludge=ninjutsu ( spits an acidinc, adhesive,poisonous bile)(Tokagaro is immune to this bile.)
Man Beast Combination Transformation: Double-Headed amphibian=ninjutsu (Tokagaro summons an amphibian from his surroundings, and bonds with it, transforming into a giant two-heade version of said amphibian.)

As Arashi was holding up a wanted poster for the mane he was supposed to kill, an old man told him that he had seen the shinobi run into the near by woods with four or five men flanking him.

"Seeing as they did not have their weapons drawn, I figured that they were body guards, not bounty hunters."

With that, Arashi started to towards the woods, but not before tossing the old man a few ryu.

Waiting on Ph34r to continue. I don't want to describe a house when it isn't right.

No hurry, I'm kind of busy this week. As described above.
More to the point, Naruto 2 is coming this fall.

Kakashi is a little... strange. It is rather odd that it took him so long to read his book. He does have to work with Naruto though, that would be distracting. Nice avatar and signiture (which I agree with) by the way.

Well, it's not just one book, it's a series I think. Halfway through he starts reading Flirting Flirting Violence instead of Paradise

And the signiture is from Red vs. Blue PSA-Winter Lames(Or the Olympics Suck) if you didn't already know.

Yes, and in Naruto II, he reads Tactics, with which Naruto tricks him into letting them win.

Well I only saw it on the internet

Akira soon did what his sensei asked and started training. He did target practice to raise his accuracy, and he also added meditating to calm his nerves...
many hours past, and no sign of Jinnai, Akira soon became nervous and wanted to check up on things...
He then soon wondered why Jinai had made him train else where...
He then heard his sensei's call and he rushed toward the sound.

Arashi started running through the woods, stalking his prey (he had seen hunter-nin in action). He finally found their campsite. Judging by the amount of use that it seems to have gotten, Arashi guessed that it was only used one night. Later that day, the mercenary finally found the bounty's present camp...

Akira caught up with Jinnai, then he told him what had happened in the past couple of hours. Then Akira told Jinnai what he had done during his daily training routine. "Yes, Sensei I worked extra hard like you asked" Akira stated. Jinnai smirked and then they all countinued with their journey to find the missing ninja Talve Ren.

((Ooh, sorry shade. did you read any above posts? Jinnai, Akira & Musari are headed towards the waterfall village to take down the Orochi's eye. Please edit accordingly.))

Musari, Jinnai, and Akira lept through the trees, back towards the waterfall village. After about an hour of nonstop traveling, Jinnai stopped. Using his thousand eyes, he saw someone, waiting...

"Hold on, Musari. We're not alone."

"Huh?" Musari asked puzzled. Suddenly, Tokagaro lept out the tree he was hiding in.

"Hehe. Guess you found me mist ninja. No matter. I'm afraid I cannot let this ninja pass." He said, pointing at Musari as he spoke. "So why don't you two other ninja's just run awayand save yourselfs?"

The three ninja stood still.

"Oh, well. You had your chance.Prepare to die!"

(Yes I read all of the above posts I just wrote my version of what I was doing during training.)

Jinnai watched the ninja's eyes, they were focused on Musari. He took his chance, and stepped out of view for a moment. He let the wire he'd been playing with trail to the branch underneath him. Tieing each end around a shuriken, he threw, the shuriken whirling around the tree behind him and hitting the tree behind the opposing ninja. Musari nodded, noticing the exploding tags leading off the wire. He dropped down to the floor, placing more tags on the tree the shinobi sat on. They all went off at the same time, and none of them hit the target. He had only his amplifier without water, and he wasn't fit to use it apart from close combat at the moment.
He made the simple seals for the genjutsu, watching as the numerous clones pulled themselves out from the ground and trees. Jinnai snapped his breather on and fell through the ground, this might be easier than expected. He need only wait till the ninja was trying to fight off the fake ones.
He let his voice trail through the clones.
"Musari, take the kid and go. I'll handle him."

"Musari, take the kid and go. I'll handle him."

"With pleasure. Come on kid, let's go!" And with that, Musari and Akira were off.

Tokagaro fought off the clones, thrashing at them with his tongue.

"Arrggh!" That's it, no more stupid checkup missions!"

One clone popped up behind the frog man. Tokagaro spat a wad of slime at the clone, hitting its mark head. The clone fell to the ground, the slime's corrosive acids ate it alive. He continued fighting them off, but they kept coming. Eventually he was overwhelmed.

"Enough!" Tokagaro screamed, as he gave up and performed his poison mist jutsu. A purple fog poured out of his mouth. This was doubly good, as it served as a smokescreen for him to use as a distraction, but it also would poison the clones as they came, and if he was lucky, poison the original.

The idiot made his first mistake, attacking the clones. The clones that he tried to poison, thrash around, it didn't matter. These were genjutsu clones, as many as Jinnai wanted and undestroyable. Cut one in half and it spawns two more. And he was safely hiding underground for the most part aware of the situation. He let the gas disipate, making the clones swarm around him in a loose circle. A circle that would get tighter the more clones were created. He slowly made his way behind the frog, lurching out of the ground, he tossed a kunai. Unseen the idiot fell.
Jinnai dispelled the trick and ran off after Musari and Akira. This would turn out to be interesting.

tokagaro lay on the ground, unconscious. Not dead, unconcious. The kunai had hit him, but in his lower back. his "tail" per se. And like many lizards and amphibians, he could dislocate his "tail" and grow a new one. The skin of his lower back peeled off his body and fell to the ground. This hurt like the devil, and caused him to sink deeper into unconsciousness. But when he awoke, he would be angry. Noone likes him when he's angry.

Musari and Akira had not gotten far when jinnai caught back up.

"Either your really fast, we're really slow, or that guy was hopeless." Musari said, although the joke was forced.
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A day passed. Two days. On the end of the 2nd day, they were in the waterfall village. Jinnsi and akira had taken off their headbands to be safe. Eventually, they came to a two-story white house with orange window frames and a green roof.

"Welcome to my humble abode, boys." Musari said as he knocked on the door.

A small redheaded six year old girl wearing a pink dress and holding a teddy bear came to the door.

"Daddy!" The little girl squealed in delight as she hugged Musari's leg.

"Good to see you too, Kalia." Musari said to his daughter, ruffling her hair.

"Kalia, who's the door..." Said a tall, 34 year old, brunette coming to the door.

"Hi Jez." Musari said to his wife, leaning over to kiss her.

"What are you doing here Musari?" Jez asked in a concerned tone.

Musari told Kalia to run along, and onnce she was out of earshot, explained the situation.

"Oh..." Jez said, unable to say anything.

"But it's okay, I've got these guy s to help take down the Orochi's Eye." He motioned to Jinnai and Akira, who introduced themselves and explained their part in the events that had transpired.

"Relax, honey, It'll all be okay." Musari said to his wife reassuringly. He wished he was sure of it.

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Meanwhile,at Orochi's Eye HQ, Shishioh briefed his master of the story thus far.

"Well, I can't say it's the best descision but it's the only option I can think of. Musari, get them out of here, I assume your family is more important than all this."
Jinnai kept close eyes on the evironment around them. He didn't like the situation one bit, secretly pulling two small bells off the fence and tieing each one to a senbon. He watched as the group rushed off, leaving him and Akira alone. He sent the Chunin inside, telling him to get water in everything he could find that would hold it. While Jinnai took one of the senbon and jammed it into the door just so. Tapping it with his index to see if it worked. Outside of that, he tied another string to the bell and trailed it inside until it led to the door across the room. The next senbon stayed in his pocket. Rattling as he walked.
"I am not in the mood for this, not with a chunin and no team to back me up. I might not even last out at this rate."
He attached an explosive tag to the door underneath the belled senbon. Sighing as he sat down in the corner next to the string.

Musari took his wife and daughter into town to their good friends, the Shilayn's house. He knocked on the door.

"Hello, Musari," Mr.Shilayn said."How are you?"

"Fine, Mako. Listen our house is being....fumigated, and I was wondering if Jez and Kalia could stay here." Musari said.

"Of course! Come on in."

"No thanks, Mako, I have to go." And wtih that, he ushered Kalai and Jez into the Shilayn house and went on his way. On the wya back, he noticed Kalai had dropped her teddy Bear. He picked it up and went back to the Shilayn house. When he got there, he was horrified to see that the door had been kicked in, and the house ransacked. He dashed in, fearing for his family's lives. His fears where justified when he saw the Shilayns, Kalia, and Jez all dead on the floor of the guest bedroom, each one with a shenbon through the neck.

"I told you, Musari.'

Musari dropped the stuffed bear as he turned around to see Shishioh and a small band of Orochi's eye members standing behind him, all armed to th teeth.

"YOU DEMONS!!!" Musari screamed. "WHAT HAVE YOU DONE!!! I SWEAR I'LL KILL EVERY LAST ONE OF YOU!!!"

Musari activated his Kekkei Genkai, and ran in headlong with the soulless killers.

Jinnai stood up, knocking the unexpcted chunins aside. He'd waited at the wrong house, Musari probably the one in trouble. But, he didn't dare go after him, he'd end up as a target with the man in a blind fit of rage.
"Akira, we're leaving. The mission comes first." He sighed, not believing a word of it.
He walked out of the village, headed toward Grass Country. Akira behind, walking just as slowly as he was. He had no attachement to the Waterfall ninja, it was just the concept of killing one's entire family that bothered him. He simply had a ninja to kill, nothing else mattered. And with that, he continued, out from under the village's cascading waterfall. And into the forests beyond. Tieing his bandana around his head. He might have done something for Musari, if they were both Mist, but they weren't and he couldn't.
"Today I lost my mind, tonight I lose my soul, and the old grey is none the wiser for it."

Musari lept headlong into the fray, stabbing one ninja then tossing his body into another. He ripped the left eye out of another ninja before ripping the same ninja's heart out. He then used his bringer darkness technique and began slicing them down one by one. And yet....Shishioh wasn't dead. Outside the slaughterhouse, Shishioh stood, a sadistic grin on his face.  Musari wasted no time on words. He ran straight towards Shishioh, and knocked him three feet in the air before he fell back to earth, where Musari promptly grabbed him by his scarf, placed his other hand on Shishioh's head, pushed on the head, pulled onthe scarf,......the result was less than pretty. All his opponents dead, Musari ran back to his house.

Dammit. Musari thought when he saw Jinnai wasn't there. Backstabber.

But it didn't really matter. all that mattered right then was killing the leader of the Orochi's Eye.

((I've named the leader Unagi.))

(read right to left)

Ooh so that's how Gaara's freind looks like. He looks a little skinnier though without the hat...or maybe it's just me.

They're siblings.
Neechan/Neesan means Sister. It could also mean Brother but I'm not sure.
Also, at this time I would like to mention, we don't want to get too violent with this or use too many of those taboo words.

Oops. My bad. But hey, That's what I would've done in that situation.

Understandable

By the way, two music videos of Naruto and Gaara I did a while back
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kiHHLDu27ps

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KFXCdFKryEY
With the release of the Wii this fall, you think they're going to release Clash of Ninja 3 and 4 for the gamecube in America?
I mean, sales for the Wii won't be at their peak till the summer of next year.

I apologize for my absence, but I have not had the time lately. Are the Naruto games any good? The screenshots look slightly blocky to me.

As the Head-Hunter was was stalking his prey, he finally found the terrorists' current camp. He easily took out two sentries with his summoned earth senbon. I do not know how much longer I have.