Topic: Kill the jedi or the bounty hunter

This is how you play. We have to work as a team but you have a choice of what team you want to play. You can play jedi or bounty hunter. Do not turn on your partners, OR YOU GET KICKED OFF!!You have the weapons of a bounty hunter if you choose to be one, if you want to be a jedi you just get a lightsaber. Guests are welcome to join:):)

Ok I am a bounty hunter.

Gender: Female
Name: Kayla Kim
Hair color: Black
Eye color: Light blue

Im a jedi knight. :D

Gender: Male
Name: Traviss Kaleth
height: 5'9

{MW} TW

Gender: Male
Name: En'de Telven
Height: 6' 0''

Bounty Hunter

Ok so that is two bounty hunters at the moment and one jedi

Lets just get this show on the road! We dont need  EVERYBODY to start. :/

TW

Good idea, were should it start Coruscant or Tatooine?

Tatooine, Coruscant is too large

Yeah, Tatooine is the home of Star Wars. lets do it!!! :D

TW

Mara, you have the floor to start us out of course.

Traviss Kaleth is a jedi with a bounty on his head and is trying to escape from Tatooine, but there are two bounty hunters who are after him for alot of credits, and the name of the two bounty hunter was En'de Telven and Kayla Kim. They searched but Traviss was hiding

En'de rasped, a thin tube hanging from his lips, leading to a pack at his waist. He hated surveliance, especially on Tatooine; the sand clogged up his breather. But it was better than actually breathing the air of a cantina. The opposite side of the table sat Kayla, sipping her personal favorite. His was nice and bitter with a straw, just how he liked it.
"The more I see that thing the more I want to rip it out of your mouth y'know, what's wrong with the outside air?"
"It's dirty in here, plus if we're smoked out I don't have problems. These things saved us on that battlestation after all."
She sighed, putting her drink down.
"Whatever. just look for that Jedi."
He put down his drink, watching the straw twirl around a minute before giving a quick glance around the room. 'What in the world does a jedi look like?'

"I wasn't able to see him properly" said Kayla as she got up

En'de leaned back instead of getting up, finished his drink, and then stood up to meet Kayla outside. Annoyed, not a this partner, but the fact that he didn't know who he was going after in the first place. He had to do all the research for this one, even to the point of figuring out how a lightsaber works, easy but very boring, very quick. Not that he felt inferior or superior, it was just one of those things. By the time he made it outside, the suns had set leaving the cold desert air to flourish, it made him glad he was wearing his overcoat. Even though he was always wearing it. He grabbed the tube and yanked it out, letting it real back to the pack. He'd really wanted to hunt wampa this week, or at least go after something that doesn't have the tendency to slash your arm off faster than you can think, maybe he'd skip it and find a krayt dragon.
"We're sticking to this, I don't want you wandering off into the desert after some animal."
"I wasn't thinking that at all...well, not as much as usual."

"So then what do we do?" asked Kayla, :sigh: "hmm" she wonderd, "If I were a jedi where would I hide" she said curiously.

they're talking about me again....Traviss thought. He looked across the room at the two bounty hunters. There was on with some sort of gas mask on, and one what looked like a ruged but actractive female. He could sense they're thoughts focusing in on himself. The dusty brown robe, and the strange helmet he found on Mos Eisley's desert floor, had certainly protected sight from the two ruthless hunters. After all.....Traviss thought, hunters only seem to think outside of the box........ironic.....Traviss took another sip of the rogji wine he was served, as he hid right under thier nose.

:D TW

"Well since he is a jedi he could be anywhere" said Kayla as she looked around

Name:Klyve Vontron
Gender:Male
Affiliation:Jedi

Klyve Vontron sat at ne of the tables in the cantina near the back.he was wearing a brown poncho and was drinking a Correlian Cooler.he was hiding."I hate bounty hunters.." he muttered to himself.he had been hiding for months and running sometimes too.He had a fellow jedi on tatooine a certain Traviss Kaleth.they were hiding from the bounty hunters that had been on their tail since the bounty was posted.sure you could use the mind trick on most of them but they had grown wiser.they had started carrying forcesensitive creatures that would alert them as to when a jedi used his force powers.so far he hadn't been found yet.so far...

En'de winced, he was no Jedi but something in the air felt funny. He'd since gone back inside to get another drink, noticing a slight qualm near the back of the room. It didn't look right, glossy eyes make for a nice show piece, he might have found his Jedi. He put the tube from his pack back into his mouth, fixing it in place. Only one way to check, this always works. He pulled a knife from his overcoat, flung it toward the figure and watched carefully. Apart from a loud ping nothing much seemed to happen apart from everyone but a certain figure ducking their heads to save their skins.
"G'day mister Jedi, we've been lookin' for you."
He unsnapped the strap slung across him like a bandoleer. Put his arm back, and grabbed his favorite Jedi hunting utensil.
"I'm sure you recognize the electrostaff, but what can you do?"

Then the two bounty hunters had almost cought one of the jedi but he got away "Damn, they got away!" Kayla said in an a mad tone

Klyve stood up and slowly pulled of his poncho.sure he left his lightsaber in his hiding place but that didn't matter.he was a specialist in many things and it just so happend that he was a bunduki master.all he had to do was get the electrostaff away from the scum and thenhe'd leave the planet.En'de made the first move doing a string of attacks with the 'staff.Klyve dodged them all and put in a few counterattacks here and there."Very fancy jedi but you're not gonna win" sneered En'de."What makes you so sure of that" retorted the jedi and performed a quick uppercut followed by a punch at the bounty hunter's gut.En'de quickly recovered himself and spun the electrostaff with the skill of a master nearly hitting vontron in the head.Kayla walked in and was startled by the commotion.She quickly pulled her blaster and set it to stun trying to get a clean shot."Great just great now i have two bounty hunters to deal with" Vontron thought.

Kayla stuck the gun up right at Klyve, when suddenly it flew right out of her hands into a figure's still sitting at the table. "Well, well," said Kayla. "I guess we hit the jackpot. Two jedi in one day?!" Kayla stood firmly infront of Traviss at the table. He quickly stood up out of his seat and took of the robe, his helmet still on. He stuck the gun right in Kayla's face when, "clacK!" Kayla spin kicked the gun out of Traviss' hand. She came around for another kick, but Traviss caught her foot firmly. "Flack!!" Kayla took the oportunity to then to ANOTHER spin kick to knock Traviss's helmet right off. A young man with bright blonde hair stood stood infront of Kayla. "heh, your more fiesty than I thought......" Traviss said. Kayla stood perfectly still for some reason. Traviss clenched his fist and went to give Kayla a punch as Kayla blocked with her hands. Suddenly everything was in slow motion.......Traviss couldnt do it. He couldnt punch the woman in front of him. He looked into Kayla's eyes and for some reason........he just couldnt. Traviss quickly opened his hand and "FWOOM!!" he force pushed her all the way across the room, smashing her into some tables.
Then out of nowhere, End'e was swinging the electrostaff at Traviss. He quickly got his saber out "VZZMmmmm..." the blue saber clashed many times with the hunter's staffKylve force grabbed his saber from his hiding spot and soon joined in with the duel. a couple counters, and blocks, and another counter and....."VZZSHEEE!" Traviss had broken a peice of End'e's breath mask and made a saber cut along his chest. "Now run!!" Kylve shouted. they ran as fast as they could out of the Cantina into the streets of Mos Eisley.

TW
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Kayla got up feeling dizzy after she had been thrown threw tables "What happend" Kayla said in a confused way

En'de picked himself up and sat down in a chair that was still intact; kayla and him the only people left inside the cantina. His shirt had been sliced through, he could still feel the mark where the saber had hit. Thankfully just a flesh wound, all he had to do was fix his breather. He pulled the tube completely out, throwing it away amist the rubble. He had a replacement inside his pocket, fixing that up he went and looked for his staff. Which was stuck under the halve of a table and part of the bar for some reason. He was not in a good mood, enough that he pulled his sheller out and blew a hole in the wall the size of his fist.
He let Kayla lean on him to keep herself steady. His wound had healed by now, a little biological trait he liked not that it would help him should his limbs be cut off.
"When we catch those two, I'm going to personally tatoo our names into their skin. But first, I'm sure you want to get back to the ship."
He had his hunting clothes there anyway. He'd merely been drinking, not expected a Jedi in a cantina anyway.

"Ok, lets get back to our ship" said Kayla

By the time they made it back, fifteen minutes later. He'd never gotten the chance to see where the Jedi had gone but he'd seen the direction of their foot prints in the sand. He stumbled inside, letting Kayla go first. He headed into his quarters, locking the door behind him. He threw his overcoat on the bed. snapped his shirt off, and sat down to think. He wouldn't be able to get anywhere tonight, not that those Jedi could either. He wasn't so much worried about creatures or the cold of the desert, he just didn't feel like chasing after two Jedi at the moment. He half hazardly put his electrostaff away. Opening his closet, he put the overcoat up and unlocked the box sitting up against the inside wall. He'd be better prepared next time. And then he went to bed, everything sorted out for tomorrow.

The next day, Kayla got up from her nap and said "What a day it was yesterday, I never thought would have a good sleep, but we still have to get those two jedi. I just wish they would pop out of no where so we could catch them" said Kayla

En'de pushed the covers back, pulled a shirt out of the closet and snapped it shut. He pulled the box out, lugging it to the bed. Glancing to the door, he made sure it was still locked. Apart from that, he pulled what looked to be random  equipment out of the case. He usually used it for hunting animals but a Jedi would require just as much effort. It's contents included: one arm cover, mask and tubes, and to finish off a leather glove. Apart from that, he had one massive cylinder in the corner.
He strapped the arm cover on, it lead from his shoulder to the claw tipped fingers at the end. Much like everything else he owned it snapped on. A group of wires trailing from the shoulder he'd wory about later. En'de slung his overcoat on and attached two tubes into the mask near the bottom that lead to his breather now located near the small of his back instead of his hip; dropping the mask into a pocket he'd use it later. He grabbed the cylinder with his regular arm hefted it onto his shoulder. And with that he unlocked the door and headed for the cockpit. His favorite fire-arm dangling from his hip under his coat.
"I just can't wait for the hunt."

"En'de, you ready to hunt some jedi scum?" Kayla said as she put her mask on

He leered, leaning over to lock up the insides of the ship. Kayla already outside waiting. He was a native Treshnan, born on a planet much like Tatooine just more uninhabitable, as a custom when his people went anywhere especially hunting they at least wore half-masks to protect their faces from the environment. Kayla had merely picked it up from him that he knew of. He lugged the cylinder out with him, locking the loading ramp they walked out of the dock towards town.
"Kayla...I'm going to ask around the back at the dock. You could at least try that cantina again."
They parted ways, En'de striking up a bland conversation with a droid that registered landing permits and I.D.s
"Look, all I want to know is if you saw two humanoids in cloaks...male...with an odd handle looking device at their wastes?"
"Possibly, allow me a minute to check."
En'de waited unpatiently, he was more ready to kill something than he'd been in a long time and about ready to just search the entire desert instead.
"Yes...since you're such a good friend of them sir, I'll give you there last registered logging on Tatooine."
He'd lied to get the information, not that it mattered to a droid.
"Here sir."
He grabbed the note from the droid and bustled off, he found the place fifteen minutes later after contacting Kayla. A bit of a hole along a side street with a strange mold growing on the door. He opened it thusly, sheller in one hand. He'd definatly found his Jedi hide away. He closed it behind himself, sitting down in the dark. He could wait for their return. He put the mask on, attaching the other two plugs from his cover arm into the mask. The cylinder standing next to the door in what looked to be anitcipation.
"I just love the waiting game..."

"I am so bored of sitting here you know that, I just want to kill those two jedi and get back home" said Kayla

En'de laughed, he didn't mind at all. Kayla was just too impatient. He spent the time examining the room, trying to find as many ways to exploit the environ.
"Would you prefer we play 20 questions while we wait?"

"I would do anything to stop me from being bored waiting" said Kayla

He snickered.
"Alright, I thought of something"
"Animal,vegatable or mineral?" Kayla
He bent his head down, examining the floor.
"Animal"
"species?"
He picked up a forgotten food wrapper.
"Ubese"
It still had a little food left in it.
"planet?"
He tossed that aside, rummaging around without getting up and turning the lights on.
"not sure"
He found an old copy of some magazine, maybe there was something in there to pass the time. He handed it to Kayla not really looking at the cover. He was really beginning to hate Jedi.

"I can't wait to get those credits" said Kayla

En'de was about ready to leave, when the door creaked slowly open. The birds had come back to roost, and they'd find a couple of weasels in the nest.

"What's wrong" Kayla asked

The door stopped creaking and then shut. Klyve Vontron stepped back. He had felt something in the Force. The two bounty hunters had found his hiding place. He looked around. He walked to the nearby cantina and said to the protocol droid standing outside,"Excuse me, but could you help me with something?" The protocol droid said,"Why of course. What do you need?" klyve Vontron told the doid to follow him and soon thety were outside the jedi's hideaway. The protocol stood in front of the door waiting for the command as Klyve slipped into the alley and prepared to open the secret entrance the bounty hunters missed. "now', Klyve commanded the droid. The door opend and the bounty hunters opened fire blowing the droid to pieces. But while the bounty hunters were firing the jedi slipped in grabbed the bag of clothes on his bed and some food and jumped back through the secret entrance. "Wait a minute!" ,En'de yelled, "That's a droid not a jedi!!!"

Kayla want outside to see what was there, and then she spotted a jedi standing in the alley then Kayla went back inside. "En'de, there is a jedi in the alley" Kayla said

"En'de, there is a Jedi in the alley!"
"Good, this wall is about the right thickness."
He pulled his sheller out from his overcoat. Flipped the back open with his thumb and popped a semi-large shell into the opening and closed it back with his thumb. He raised the weapon up, aimed from the video feed coming from Kayla's mask and pulled the trigger. A large hole was in the wall, and he could hear the Figure falling to the ground. He rushed outside. Somehow he'd managed to hit someone. And it was a Jedi, lucky him. He went back in for his cylinder and came back just as Kayla was wrapping the figue up. He walked over, grabbed the kid's lightsaber and set the cylinder next to the tied Jedi. A thick metal chain slithering out of the top, around the Jedi and locking itself.
"Not sure how we did it, but we did apperantly, one more to go."
He picked up the cylinder, while Kayla dragged the Jedi.

As they walked towards the docks Kayla and En'de had a conversation of what they were going to do with their shares and what would happen if the other jedi showed at the docks. Halfway through the conversation a peculiar vvvzzzzzmmm sounded followed quickly by the realization that the other jedi had come to rescue the captured one. En'de muttered to himself, "Oh great" Traviss Kaleth threw the lightsaber at En'de. En'de side-stepped it and leveled his rifle. The lightsaber severed the chain and went back to the jedi who was quickly approaching. Before En'de had the chance to fire the severed chain whipped around his leg and pulled with enormous force. Then Kayla yelled to En'de, "The jedi attacker fled but the one we have is still in...UH-OH!!!" The jedi blew the chains off himself with the force and then made for the lightsaber. "I don't think so!" En'de said in a harsh tone grabbing the lightsaber and blasting it. "You're outgunned and outmanned. So just let us tie you up and deliver you for the bounty." "You bounty hunters underestimate the jedi." retorted the jedi as he reached back and pulled a long metal cylinder from under his clothing. "Uh-oh."whispered Kayla mostly to herself. The jedi activated the lightsaber. Two blue shafts of pure energy emerged from both ends of the cylinder.

your crazy

don't mess with mandalorians with son or daughter mandalore

"I'm going to kill the guy who sold me these chains! He said they were lightsaber proof. Let's hope his skin is blaster proof"
He pulled his sheller out, popped the back open with his thumb again, and slid a red shell in before shutting it.
"This shell has the force to kill both of us Jedi. What do you think your lightsaber can do? I've put holes in Rancor with this all the way through."
He raised the weapon with both hands, slowly pulled the trigger, the middle of the carbine rotating counter clock-wise. A black energy radiating from the barrel.
"Kayla, watch my back, there's still that other Jedi."
He was actually using a stronger stun shell, but he was about ready to use the special shells that could kill. He fired...it hit. But all it did was break the saber in half. Not useable but he was expecting it to hit the Jedi instead. He slid another red shell in. and pointed it toward the other Jedi.
"And that's all folks."

Before En'de pulled the trigger raised his arm and closed his hand into a fist. To En'de's dismay the firing tube of the carbine was crushed shut. "Oh, crap!" En'de shouted as he threw the carbine as hard as he could at the jedi.

It stopped.

The carbine floated in mid-air and then fell. Klyve called upon the force once more and jumped far away from the two bounty hunters. He reached out with the force and found Traviss. He headed to him at once.

"Lets follow them" said Kayla

En'de grimaced, watching the carbine explode in front of him. He pulled all the plugs out and ripped his mask off. Of all the things to happen.
"Kayla, there's a guy I'm going to meet in town. Do what you will until we find those Jedi again. Follow them if you really feel like it."
He was in no mood to chase Jedi at the the moment. And thus the both of them went their seperate ways for the time being. En'de picking his cylinder up and walking off. He walked until he made it to a grubby store on one of the greater streets.
"Hey En'de! Back for more chains?"
"Not really"
He raised his spare blaster up at the Twi'lek.
"I want my credits back"
The Twi'lek looked around the room for a moment.
"Well, seeing as how you don't have the chains to return. I can't give you your credits back."
He put the blaster a little closer to home.
"I don't have the chains because they were cut into pieces by a lightsaber!"
"Well, that's not my problem."
He put the blaster ever so closer, and grabbed the Twi'lek's head tail with a clawed hand.
"Either you pay me back, or things get...bloody."
He let go, the Twi'lek handing his credit chip back. He walked out, headed back to the ship for now. He got there without seeing Kayla, he unlocked the ship's ramp and stumbled up. En'de walked into his room, setting the cylinder down and looking through his closet for anything useful.
"I spose this'll do."

"So what did you do to that twi'lek back there"

En'de turned around, Kayla was leaning against the door frame. He hadn't been paying too much attention to his surroundings.
"Not much, I just wanted my money back."
He pulled his one carbine left out of the closet, this one was formed out of Mandalorian Iron and was force proof much like Mandalorian armor. It'd cost him enough, but he'd managed to test it before hand at least. This one wouldn't get crushed, but it was the last thing he had to fight Jedi with. And he'd have to buy more shells so he'd be broke by the end of the day.
"At least my electrostaff works still."

"I am glad my electrostaff still works aswell"

Alright, slight issue. I don't care if your character has an electrostaff or the same mask. But it's really screwing up the originality of both characters. I don't mind, I can understand why it could makes sense. But what really bothers me is the one sentence posts. If it's a problem just ignore me but if you could try for a little more detail. Maybe try a paragraph at the most, get in a little practice on Microsoft word first if need be. I'm not trying to be mean at all, I'm just offering a bit of weak advice. I have terrible writiing if I don't think it through, but to each his own.

Ok